11 Here I] I here 1669
12 wayes 1635-54, O'F: means 1669, and rest of MSS.
14 still ... faign'd] 1669 om. still and reads faigned
18 My soule ... to thee] From other lands my soule towards thee A18, A25, B, D, H49, JC, Lec, M(to), N, P, S, TC, W
soare. Ed: soare, 1635-69
21 harshness] rashness P. Compare Elegy V, 8
23 Faire Orithea] The fair Orithea 1669
26 Lovers] friends P
28 mindes; A18, A25, B, JC, N, TC, W: minde, 1635-69, D, H49, Lec, O'F, P
29 onely; A18, D, N, TC: onely. 1635-69