(by-and-by,” he laaghed; “you shall) to laughed.
[Chapter XV]
“was supposed to cover a gread deal of” to great.
“but somtimes the thunder and flame” sometimes.
“let me see how long his stick his—his stick and his...” add an m-dash after first instance of stick.
[Chapter XVI]
“A good house-wife, is she, that’s something,” delete first comma.
[Chapter XVII]
“nothin’ but old ’oman’stales and fribble-frabble” to ’oman’s tales.
[Chapter XXI]