“but one and ’tother, both together.” to t’other.
[Chapter LIV]
“Doctor’s Willett says he’ll have it well” to Doctor.
[Chapter LV]
“What the de’il d’ye ye mean, Master Harry?” delete ye.
“in my mind when ask ye to come over” add I after when.
[Chapter LVI]
“There’s bin changes since, and I don’t see why Wyvern should be charged so heavy?” change question mark to a period.
[Chapter LVI]
“The neighours, great and small,” to neighbours.