Page 11, ‘Had’ changed to ‘Hal,’ “you turned Hal down”
Page 13, ‘Servern’ changed to ‘Severn,’ “she was at Severn”
Page 32, ‘fi ed’ changed to ‘fixed,’ “her eyes fixed on”
Page 35, ‘anythind’ changed to ‘anything,’ “allow anything else to”
Page 39, ‘directely’ changed to ‘directed,’ “she directed grandly”
Page 39, double quote inserted after ‘improving,’ “you’re improving,” was her”
Page 46, full stop changed to comma after ‘say,’ “among the first to say,”
Page 53, double quote inserted before ‘Danny,’ “half shyly. “Danny wanted to”
Page 59, ‘alway’ changed to ‘always,’ “expression which always made Lucy”
Page 71, double quote inserted before ‘My,’ ““My ideal is a nice”