page 23 - added closing double quote "DISCUSS TERMS MONDAY"
page 44 - joined "breath" and "takingly" across line break
And Irene was breath
takingly lovely in the new dress.
page 88 - added a period at the end of the sentence
"It really would be better to notify the police"
page 117 - added a period at the end of the sentence
"Perhaps the two descriptions were the same"