Page 104 – “Pang-lung” changed to “Pan-lung” (immediately went to Pan-lung Shan)
Page 159 – “horseflesh” changed to “horse-flesh” (not fancy horse-flesh)
Page 159 – “horseflesh” changed to “horse-flesh” (will serve to prove that horse-flesh)
Page 164 – “sky-line” changed to “skyline” (on the skyline)
Page 167 – “re-occupy” changed to “reoccupy” (to reoccupy their trench)
Page 169 – “Akasako Yama” changed to “Akasaka Yama” (to the hollow behind Akasaka Yama)
Page 204 – “fuzes” changed to “fuses” (using time fuses)
Page 215 – “loop-holes” changed to “loopholes” (the loopholes were furnished)
Page 265 – “sandbags” changed to “sand-bags” (piles of rubbish and torn sand-bags)
Page 273 – “re-occupied” changed to “reoccupied” (whereupon our men at once reoccupied it)