The numbers of the "Notes" correspond with the superior figures in the body of the text.
| ACT I. | ||
| Note | [1] | Changed to 2 in violet pencil. |
| [2] | Lines from 2 to 2 scored out. | |
| [3] | These lines scored out, and "we will have" added. | |
| [4] | This word underlined. | |
| [5] | These lines scored out. | |
| [6] | These lines scored out, "what news to-night?" inserted. | |
| [7] | Lines scored out. | |
| [8] | Altered to "He." | |
| [9] | Lines scored out. | |
| [10] | Altered to "signal for." | |
| [11] | Lines scored out. | |
| [12] | Lines scored out. | |
| [13] | Altered to "Be calm, Michael!" | |
| [14] | These words underlined. | |
| [15] | Words underlined. | |
| [16] | Word underlined. | |
| [17] | Lines scored out. | |
| [18] | Words scored out. | |
| [19] | Lines scored out, "from Berlin" inserted. | |
| [20] | Word scored through. | |
| [21] | Altered to "strong." | |
| [22] | These lines scored through. | |
| [23] | Scored through. | |
| [24] | Altered to "martial law scheme." | |
| [25] | Altered to "To raise the barricades." | |
| [26] | Crossed out. | |
| [27] | The word "pause" as a stage direction inserted. | |
| [28] | Lines crossed out. | |
| [29] | Scored through. | |
| [30] | Scored through. | |
| [31] | Word underlined. | |
| [32] | Word underlined. | |
| [33] | Words "Who is there?" inserted. | |
| [34] | Scored through. | |
| [35] | Scored through. | |
| [36] | Scored through. | |
| [37] | Altered to "He has sold us." | |
| [38] | Word underlined. | |
| ACT II. | ||
| Note | [1] | Lines scored through. |
| [2] | Altered to "you missed." | |
| [3] | Altered to "profession." | |
| [4] | Scored through. | |
| [5] | Word scored through. | |
| [6] | Insert "for them to go to." | |
| [7] | Insert "dining." | |
| [8] | Altered to "bored to death." | |
| [9] | Scored through. | |
| [10] | Word underlined. | |
| [11] | Altered to "a." | |
| [12] | Lines scored through. | |
| [13] | "O God!" scored through. | |
| [14] | Scored through. | |
| [15] | Lines scored through. | |
| [16] | Words scored through. | |
| [17] | Word underlined. | |
| [18] | Word underlined. | |
| [19] | Words underlined. | |
| [20] | Stage direction, "a pause" indicated. | |
| [21] | Altered to "may." | |
| [22] | Word "I" underlined. | |
| [23] | This speech cut out. | |
| ACT III. | ||
| Note | [1] | "Marat" underlined. |
| [2] | Altered to "Vera. Unmask! a spy!" | |
| [3] | Scored through. | |
| [4] | Scored through. | |
| [5] | Scored through. | |
| [6] | Lines scored through. | |
| [7] | Insert "and quite as unintelligible." | |
| [8] | Alter "Pres." to "Vera." | |
| [9] | Scored through. | |
| [10] | These lines struck out. | |
| [11] | This passage scored through. | |
| [12] | This is struck out. | |
| [13] | Scored through. | |
| [14] | Scored through. | |
| [15] | This speech cut out. | |
| [16] | Lines scored through. | |
| [17] | Lines scored through. | |
| [18] | Cut out this passage and insert "Alexis" after "but." | |
| [19] | Lines scored through. | |
| [20] | Altered to "No! No!" | |
| [21] | This passage is cut out. | |
| [22] | Insert "Alexis" in place of "him." | |
| [23] | Lines scored through. | |
| [24] | This speech cut out. | |
| [25] | This passage is scored through. | |
| [26] | The words "no laugh" are inserted here—possibly as a stage direction. | |
| [27] | Passage scored through. | |
| [28] | In place of "the Czar" read "Alexis." | |
| [29] | Delete this speech. | |
| [30] | This passage is scored out. | |
| [31] | This passage is scored out. | |
| [32] | This passage is scored out. | |
| ACT IV. | ||
| Note | [1] | These three speeches are scored through. |
| [2] | Insert "for the politician." | |
| [3] | All these lines are cut out. | |
| [4] | Alter to "Gentlemen." | |
| [5] | Cut out this sentence. | |
| [6] | Words scored through. | |
| [7] | Delete "the crown." | |
| [8] | Substitute "stop near" for "stay with." | |
| [9] | This passage is cut out. | |
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