“letting him have reins, petrel, with the rest” to poitrel.
“was indeed like the painter, that faith in his picture” to saith.
“thy wretched heart think it was timerousness that made” to timorousness.
“Place, see my grave up torn” to uptorn.
“repine with never so much grieving-Mother,” replace hyphen with period and space.
“This sight being the more cruel, since both love” to fight.
“took a body to show his (self unconceivable) beauty” to else-unconceivable.
“and looking a sideward upon the ground” delete a.
“that were accessary to this cruelty” to accessory.
“for no eye could have abiden to see such beauty” to abidden.