black-yellow, and pink pools

'link' changed to 'pink'.

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Lord forgie us

'forgie' may be a form of dialect meaning 'forgive'. Unchanged.

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the final book of Mononi

'Mononi' may be 'Moroni'. Unchanged.

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maidan also spelled maidân and maidàn. No change.