[[51]]

gentler] lovelier MS. erased.

[[53]]

reel'd] pass'd MS. erased.

[[54-7]]


Like a tall Wave that

stormy
huge and dark

Reels sideway from a toiling Bark
Toil'd in the deep sea-trough

Is traversed by
Catches askance


the Lightning flash

or

Like a huge Billow, rude and dark

That

as it falls off from a Bark
tumbling mainward from
Toil'd in the deep Sea-trough