Add illustrator’s credit and brief note indicating this novel’s position in the series. See above.
[Footnotes]
Place footnotes in square brackets inline with the text.
[Chapter I]
Change “Shahbaz Khan, and his son, Karimdad” to Karimdâd. (Keeping this character’s name consistent.)
[Chapter V]
“Have it your own way, my dear, You have your…” change the second comma to a period.
[Chapter XIII]
“stopping the daks and attacking our boats” to dâks. (Keeping this foreign word consistent.)
[Chapter XV]