Change “You musn’t be so doleful” to mustn’t.
[Chapter IX]
“detention in the court yard” to courtyard.
[Chapter XIV]
“it may be necessary any day to to get all our forces together” delete one to.
[Chapter XVI]
“there was no gurantee of even temporary safety” to guarantee.
[Chapter XX]
“for the poor starving peeple around” to people.
[Chapter XXI]