Sc. 4.
"Unthread the rude eye of rebellion."
Theobald reads untread and way. A little further on we have, "We will untread the steps of damned flight;" but no change is needed here.
"For if the French be lords of this loud day,
He means to recompense," etc.
Here 'He' can only refer to John, while it is evidently the Dolphin that is meant. I have therefore, as I find Mr. Lloyd also has done, read Prince for 'French,' and of course lord for 'lords.' But as in this play Prince alone is never used of the Dolphin, it may be that a line is lost. It might have been something of this sort: "And Fortune smile upon the Dolphin's arms."
Sc. 6.
"Unkind Remembrance! Thou and endless Night."