| CHANGED | FROM | TO | ||
| Page [7]: | “They are exits” | “There are exits” | ||
| Page [7]: | “shreiks, strumming of” | “shrieks, strumming of” | ||
| Page [7]: | “twdry best of 1900” | “tawdry best of 1900” | ||
| Page [7]: | “litle friendly pushing” | “little friendly pushing” | ||
| Page [7]: | “With head insite” | “With head inside” | ||
| Page [8]: | “accordian, the other” | “accordion, the other” | ||
| Page [9]: | “I don’t want to be” | “I don’t want you to be” | ||
| Page [9]: | “stretched and a” | “stretched on a” | ||
| Page [9]: | “by twos and three” | “by twos and threes” | ||
| Page [10]: | “A guitar, accordian” | “A guitar, accordion” | ||
| Page [11]: | “You won’t go it” | “You won’t go in” | ||
| Page [11]: | “mandolin, banjo, accordian” | “mandolin, banjo, accordion” | ||
| Page [12]: | “did you say John” | “Did you say John” | ||
| Page [16]: | “Countée Cullen” | “Countee Cullen” | ||
| Page [25]: | “on his seige against” | “on his siege against” | ||
| Page [27]: | “wont of most bridgegrooms” | “wont of most bridegrooms” | ||
| Page [33]: | “things he remebered” | “things he remembered” | ||
| Page [34]: | “psuedo grandeur” | “pseudo grandeur” | ||
| Page [36]: | “sound of castenets” | “sound of castanets” | ||
| Page [36]: | “heels clicking rythmically” | “heels clicking rhythmically” | ||
| Page [37]: | “black poppes and red” | “black poppies and red” | ||
| Page [37]: | “a lilly ... a red lilly” | “a lily ... a red lily” | ||
| Page [37]: | “exhultant ... and in his” | “exultant ... and in his” | ||
| Page [42]: | “Dey thows ’em away” | “Dey throws ’em away” | ||
| Page [42]: | “done got to biggety” | “done got too biggety” | ||
| Page [42]: | “two botles uh strawberry” | “two bottles uh strawberry” | ||
| Page [43]: | “At hates yuh lak” | “Ah hates yuh lak” | ||
| Page [44]: | “kin run thew whut” | “kin run threw whut” | ||
| Page [44]: | “he spring back toward” | “she spring back toward” | ||
| Page [45]: | “and is one open eye” | “and his one open eye” | ||
| Page [45]: | “Zona Neale Hurston.” | “Zora Neale Hurston.” | ||
| Page [48]: | “their time anouncing” | “their time announcing” | ||
| Page [48]: | “life-life character in” | “life-like character in” |
All other inconsistencies are as in the original.