4. Show how one such change could be made.
5. Does the external (visible or bodily) action stand out as clearly as the internal (invisible or soul) action?
6. (a) Is the story probable? (b) Usual? (c) Convincing?—That is, does it seem real?
7. What are its strongest points, to you?
8. Criticise its weak points, if any.
9. Can you suggest any improvements?
10. (a) Do you know any stories similar in theme? (b) If so, which is the better story, to you, and why?
11. Briefly write out the plots of three stories of action or adventure, taken from any book or magazine.
12. Compare one of them with one of these two stories.