The following is a list (in order of appearance) of corrections made to the original text, with the corrections indicated by square brackets:

knows, moove [moves,] acts

hing [thing] to be

It is realy [really] so fatal

its affect [effect] on the system

their babe's mouth's [mouths].

Insantiy [Insanity], which can readily

craving for Alcohoic [Alcoholic] drinks,

stimulents [stimulants], hence the craving

times imparing [impairing] its vital