In Chapter V, a missing period was added after "from two minutes to twenty", and "B. B. J!" was changed to "B. B. J.!".
In Chapter VII, "the B. J-est plebe" was changed to "the B. J.-est plebe", "as those yearlings had even seen" was changed to "as those yearlings had ever seen", and "'Will they try it' he thought?" was changed to "'Will they try it?' he thought."
In Chapter X, "his face on a broad grin" was changed to "on his face a broad grin".
In Chapter XI, a missing question mark was added after "Is he hurt".
In Chapter XIV, "a rougish look" was changed to "a roguish look", and a quotation mark was removed before "It'll take lots of planning beforehand".
In Chapter XX, "some little nervousness, to" was changed to "some little nervousness, too".
In Chapter XXII, "the corner of the seige battery inclosure" was changed to "the corner of the siege battery inclosure", "that reminds be of another" was changed to "that reminds me of another", "his mist stately tone" was changed to "his mist stately tone", and a period was changed to a comma after "he added, more seriously".
In Chapter XXIII, "bound his supenders about him" was changed to "bound his suspenders about him".
In Chapter XXIV, a period was changed to a comma after "as his friend touched it".
In Chapter XXVII, a quotation mark was removed after "And—and——".