8. page 213—changed punctuation at end of sentence ...now I am willing to die.,' to period + double quote
9. page 213—added missing double quote at end of sentence ...before I sail, with your permission.
10. page 213—added missing double quote in sentence ...as we drove off. You told the truth...
11. page 215—changed comma to period at end of sentence Yes, dear Frank,"
12. page 215—added missing double quote to sentence ...thumping his right side, you lacerate my heart...
13. page 216—added missing double quote at end of sentence ...You are the most angelic, adorable—
14. page 220—corrected typo 'vison' to 'vision' in line 'Scenes of the past before his vison'
15. page 221—corrected comma to period at end of sentence '...humid with tears,'
16. page 227—removed extra quote at start of sentence 'Ah! happy, satisfied Leland!'
17. page 228—added missing quote at end of article