Violations.
(1) Needless change of voice or tense of verbs.
(2) Needless change of subject of sentences.
D. COHERENCE. P. 61–70. W. 133–146.
I. Arrangement. P. 61–65. BI, 114–120.
1. Order of Parts.
a. Related ideas brought together? W. 135.
2. Arrangement evident?
a. Subtopic and transition sentences.
II. Connection. P. 65–70. W. 142–146. BI, 94–108.