Violations.
(1) Needless change of voice or tense of verbs.
(2) Needless change of grammatical subject.
III. Connection. W. 108–110.
a. Accurate expression of relation of parts by connectives.
(1) Subordination indicated? (cf. subordination in predication under sentence unity. P. 86).
(2) Co-ordination accurately expressed?
E. EMPHASIS. P. 105–115. W. 99–103. BI, 74–84.
I. Arrangement of Parts.
1. Important parts in emphatic positions?