It was both a long ceremony and very tedious.The ceremony was both long and tedious.
A time not for words, but action.A time not for words, but for action.
Either you must grant his request or incur his ill will.You must either grant his request or incur his ill will.
My objections are, first, the injustice of the measure; second, that it is unconstitutional.My objections are, first, that the measure is unjust; second, that it is unconstitutional.

See also the third example under [Rule 12] and the last under [Rule 13].

It may be asked, what if a writer needs to express a very large number of similar ideas, say twenty? Must he write twenty consecutive sentences of the same pattern? On closer examination he will probably find that the difficulty is imaginary, that his twenty ideas can be classified in groups, and that he need apply the principle only within each group. Otherwise he had best avoid difficulty by putting his statements in the form of a table.

[16.] Keep related words together.

The position of the words in a sentence is the principal means of showing their relationship. The writer must therefore, so far as possible, bring together the words, and groups of words, that are related in thought, and keep apart those which are not so related.

The subject of a sentence and the principal verb should not, as a rule, be separated by a phrase or clause that can be transferred to the beginning.

Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.In the fifth book of The Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church.
Cast iron, when treated in a Bessemer converter, is changed into steel.By treatment in a Bessemer converter, cast iron is changed into steel.

The objection is that the interposed phrase or clause needlessly interrupts the natural order of the main clause. Usually, however, this objection does not hold when the order is interrupted only by a relative clause or by an expression in apposition. Nor does it hold in periodic sentences in which the interruption is a deliberately used means of creating suspense (see examples under [Rule 18]).

The relative pronoun should come, as a rule, immediately after its antecedent.

There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.In his eye was a look that boded mischief.
He wrote three articles about his adventures in Spain, which were published in Harper's Magazine.He published in Harper's Magazine three articles about his adventures in Spain.
This is a portrait of Benjamin Harrison, grandson of William Henry Harrison, who became President in 1889.This is a portrait of Benjamin Harrison, grandson of William Henry Harrison. He became President in 1889.