CANTO VIII

The Witch creates a snowy Lady,
2 like to Florimell,
Who wrongd by Carle by Proteus sau'd,
4 is sought by Paridell.

1 The witch creates a snowy lady 2 like to Florimell,

like to > resembling

3 Who, wronged by carl, by Proteus saved,

carl > [a] villain, [a] churl by > [and by] Proteus > (The Old Man of the Sea, a god who can assume any shape or form)

4 is sought by Paridell.

Paridell > (The name is derived from that of Paris: see 309.34:5 ff.)

308.1

SO oft as I this history record,
2 My hart doth melt with meere compassion,
To thinke, how causelesse of her owne accord
4 This gentle Damzell, whom I write vpon,
Should plonged be in such affliction,
6 Without all hope of comfort or reliefe,
That sure I weene, the hardest hart of stone,
8 Would hardly find to aggrauate her griefe;
For misery craues rather mercie, then repriefe.

1 So oft as I this history record,

history > history; story

2 My heart does melt with mere compassion

mere > pure, complete, sheer

3 To think how causeless of her own accord

causeless of her own accord > [through no fault of hers]

4 This gentle damsel, whom I write upon,

gentle > gracious; gentle; noble upon > [about]

5 Should plunged be in such affliction, 6 Without all hope of comfort or relief, 7 That sure, I ween, the hardest heart of stone

That sure > [So that surely] ween > think, believe

8 Would hardly find to aggravate her grief;

find > contrive grief > suffering, pain

9 For misery craves rather mercy than reproof.

reproof > reproof, scorn; shame, disgrace

308.2

But that accursed Hag, her hostesse late,
2 Had so enranckled her malitious hart,
That she desyrd th'abridgement of her fate,
4 Or long enlargement of her painefull smart.
Now when the Beast, which by her wicked art
6 Late forth she sent, she backe returning spyde,
Tyde with her +broken+ girdle, it a part
8 Of her rich spoyles, whom he had earst destroyd,
She weend, and wondrous gladnesse to her hart applyde.

7 broken > golden 1590

1 But that accursed hag, her hostess late,

hostess late > [erstwhile hostess]

2 Had so enrankled her malicious heart

enrankled > embittered (the "en-" prefix denotes "inward" action, and is also an intensive)

3 That she desired the abridgement of her fate,

fate > {Life, term of life allotted by the Fates}

4 Or long enlargement of her painful smart.

smart > anguish, sorrow

5 Now when the beast (which by her wicked art 6 Late forth she sent) she back returning spied,

Late > Recently

7 Tied with her broken girdle, it a part 8 Of her rich spoils (whom he had erst destroyed)

whom > [she whom, i.e. Florimell] erst > recently; first (before apparently making free with "her rich spoils")

9 She weened, and wondrous gladness to her heart applied.

weened > supposed applied > administered [as a remedy]

308.3

And with it running hast'ly to her sonne,
2 Thought with that sight him much to haue +reliued+;
Who thereby deeming sure the thing as donne,
4 His former griefe with furie fresh reuiued,
Much more then earst, and would haue algates riued
6 The hart out of his brest: for sith her ded
He surely dempt, himselfe he thought depriued
8 Quite of all hope, wherewith he long had fed
His foolish maladie, and long time had misled.

2 reliued > relieued 1609

1 And with it running hastily to her son, 2 Thought with that sight him much to have relived;

relived > revived

3 Who, thereby deeming sure the thing as done, 4 His former grief with fury fresh revived, 5 Much more than erst, and would have algates rived

erst > at first, formerly, hence: before algates > altogether, at any rate; hence: surely rived > torn

6 The heart out of his breast: for sith her dead

sith > since

7 He surely deemed, himself he thought deprived 8 Quite of all hope, wherewith he long had fed

wherewith > with which

9 His foolish malady, and long time had misled.

misled > misconducted [himself]

308.4

With thought whereof, exceeding mad he grew,
2 And in his rage his mother would haue slaine,
Had she not fled into a secret mew,
4 Where she was wont her Sprights to entertaine
The +maisters+ of her art: there was she faine
6 To call them all in order to her ayde,
And them coniure vpon eternall paine,
8 To counsell her so carefully dismayd,
How she might heale her sonne, whose senses were decayd.

5 maisters > masters 1609

1 With thought whereof exceeding mad he grew, 2 And in his rage his mother would have slain, 3 Had she not fled into a secret mew,

mew > den, secret place

4 Where she was wont her sprites to entertain,

wont > accustomed entertain > receive

5 The masters of her art: there was she fain

masters > (Cf. Macbeth IV i 63) fain > disposed; obliged

6 To call them all, in order, to her aid,

all, in order, to > (Or: "all, in order to") her aid > [aid her; her assistance]

7 And them conjure upon eternal pain

conjure > adjure, implore

8 To counsel her, so carefully dismayed,

carefully > anxiously

9 How she might heal her son, whose senses were decayed.

decayed > rotted, ruined (cf. 307.20-1, even before he saw the girdle)

308.5

By their +aduise+, and her owne wicked wit,
2 She there deuiz'd a wondrous worke to frame,
Whose like on earth was neuer framed yit,
4 That euen Nature selfe enuide the same,
And grudg'd to see the counterfet should shame
6 The thing it selfe. In hand she boldly tooke
To make another like the former Dame,
8 Another Florimell, in shape and looke
So liuely and so like, that many it mistooke.

1 aduise > deuise 1590

1 By their advice, and her own wicked wit,

wit > intelligence, mental capacity; skill

2 She there devised a wondrous work to frame,

frame > fashion

3 Whose like on earth was never framed yet, 4 That even Nature herself envied the same,

That > [So that] envied > envied; begrudged

5 And grudged to see the counterfeit should shame

the > [that the]

6 The thing itself. In hand she boldly took 7 To make another like the former dame, 8 Another Florimell, in shape and look 9 So lively, and so like, that many it mistook.

lively > life-like (cf. 101.45:4) like > resembling the original (said of a portrait, etc.); convincing mistook > [wrongly took to be Florimell]

308.6

The substance, whereof she the bodie made,
2 Was purest snow in massie mould congeald,
Which she had gathered in a shadie glade
4 Of the Riph{oe}an hils, to her reueald
By errant Sprights, but from all men conceald:
6 The same she tempred with fine Mercury,
And virgin +wex+, that neuer yet was seald,
8 And mingled them with perfect vermily,
That like a liuely sanguine it seem'd to the eye.

7 wex > wax 1609

1 The substance, whereof she the body made, 2 Was purest snow in massy mould congealed,

massy > solid, weighty mould > shape, form congealed > frozen

3 Which she had gathered in a shady glade 4 Of the Riphaean hills, to her revealed

Riphaean hills > {The mountains in Scythia, i.e. northern Europe and
Asiatic Russia}

5 By errant sprites, but from all men concealed:

errant > wandering

6 The same she tempered with fine mercury,

tempered > blended mercury > (Formerly numbered among the five elementary "principles" of which all matter was said to be composed; also called "spirit". According to Paracelsus, mercury is one of three basic components of man. Mercury was also a symbol of sprightliness, volatility, and inconstancy)

7 And virgin wax, that never yet was sealed,

sealed > [used for sealing]

8 And mingled them with perfect vermilion,

vermilion > {Cinnabar, red crystalline mercuric sulphide, used in the manufacture of red sealing-wax: it is the ore from which most of the world's mercury is derived}

9 That like a lively sanguine it seemed to the eye.

That > [So that] lively > living, vital, life-like sanguine > blood-red colour (amorousness is among the attributes associated with the "sanguine" complexion; cf. 306.8:5)

308.7

In stead of eyes two burning lampes she set
2 In siluer sockets, shyning like the skyes,
And a quicke mouing Spirit did arret
4 To stirre and roll them, like +a womans+ eyes;
In stead of yellow lockes she did deuise,
6 With golden wyre to weaue her curled head;
Yet golden wyre was not so yellow thrise
8 As Florimells faire haire: and in the stead
Of life, she put a Spright to rule the carkasse dead.

4 a womans > to womens 1590

1 Instead of eyes two burning lamps she set 2 In silver sockets, shining like the skies, 3 And a quick moving sprite did arrest

quick > living arrest > ordain, entrust

4 To stir and roll them, like a woman's eyes; 5 Instead of yellow locks she did devise 6 With golden wire to weave her curled head; 7 Yet golden wire was not so yellow thrice

thrice > many times over; by a third

8 As Florimell's fair hair: and in the stead

stead > place

9 Of life she put a sprite to rule the carcase dead.

308.8

A wicked Spright yfraught with fawning guile,
2 And faire resemblance aboue all the rest,
Which with the Prince of Darknesse fell +somewhile+,
4 From heauens blisse and euerlasting rest;
Him needed not instruct, which way were best
6 Himselfe to fashion likest Florimell,
Ne how to speake, ne how to vse his gest,
8 For he in counterfeisance did excell,
And all the wyles of wemens wits knew passing well.

3 somewhile > lomewhyle 1590; lomewhile 1596

1 A wicked sprite fraught with fawning guile,

fraught > filled

2 And fair resemblance above all the rest,

resemblance > appearance, show

3 Which with the Prince of Darkness fell somewhile

somewhile > at some time; at some former time

4 From heaven's bliss and everlasting rest; 5 Him needed not instruct which way were best

needed not > [it was not necessary to]

6 Himself to fashion likest Florimell,

likest > most like

7 Nor how to speak, nor how to use his gest,

gest > bearing, mien; gesture, hence: gestures, "body language"

8 For he in counterfeisance did excel,

counterfeisance > imposture

9 And all the wiles of women's wits knew passing well.

wits > minds passing > surpassingly, exceedingly

308.9

Him shaped thus, she deckt in garments gay,
2 Which Florimell had left behind her late,
That who so then her saw, would surely say,
4 It was her selfe, whom it did imitate,
Or fairer then her selfe, if ought algate
6 Might fairer be. And then she forth her brought
Vnto her sonne, that lay in feeble state;
8 Who seeing her gan streight vpstart, and thought
She was the Lady selfe, +whom+ he so long had sought.

9 whom > who 1590, 1596

1 Him shaped thus, she decked in garments gay, 2 Which Florimell had left behind her late,

late > recently

3 That whoso then her saw would surely say

That whoso > [So that whoever] her > (Appropriately confusing the snowy Florimell's gender)

4 It was herself whom it did imitate, 5 Or fairer than herself, if aught algate

algate > anyhow, in any way

6 Might fairer be. And then she forth her brought 7 To her son, that lay in feeble state; 8 Who, seeing her, gan straight upstart, and thought

gan > did straight > straightway; straight, erect upstart > start up (with the double meaning)

9 She was the lady herself, whom he so long had sought.

308.10

Tho fast her clipping twixt his armes twaine,
2 Extremely ioyed in so happie sight,
And soone forgot his former sickly paine;
4 But she, the more to seeme such as she hight,
Coyly rebutted his embracement light;
6 Yet still with gentle +countenaunce+ retained,
Enough to hold a foole in vaine delight:
8 Him long she so with shadowes entertained,
As her Creatresse had in charge to her ordained.

6 countenaunce > countenant 1596

1 Tho, fast her clipping 'twixt his arms twain,

Tho > Then fast > firmly; very closely clipping > clasping, embracing arms twain > two arms

2 Extremely joyed in so happy sight,

Extremely joyed > [He] took pleasure extremely; hence: He took extreme pleasure so > [such a]

3 And soon forgot his former sickly pain; 4 But she, the more to seem such as she hight,

hight > was called

5 Coyly rebutted his embracement light;

rebutted > reproved; repulsed embracement > embraces light > wanton (qualifying "embracement"); quickly, lightly (qualifying "rebutted")

6 Yet still with gentle countenance retained,

retained > [retained his interest]

7 Enough to hold a fool in vain delight:

vain > futile; weak, foolish

8 Him long she so with shadows entertained,

so > thus

9 As her creatress had in charge to her ordained.

308.11

Till on a day, as he disposed was
2 To walke the woods with that his Idole faire,
Her to disport, and idle time to pas,
4 In th'open freshnesse of the gentle aire,
A knight that way there chaunced to repaire;
6 Yet knight +he+ was not, but a boastfull swaine,
That deedes of armes had euer in despaire,
8 Proud Braggadocchio, that in vaunting vaine
His glory did repose, and credit did maintaine.

6 he > omitted from 1596

1 Till on a day, as he disposed was 2 To walk the woods with that his idol fair,

idol > idol; effigy; phantom, idolum

3 Her to disport, and idle time to pass,

disport > divert, entertain

4 In the open freshness of the gentle air, 5 A knight that way there chanced to repair;

repair > go, betake himself

6 Yet knight he was not, but a boastful swain,

swain > fellow

7 That deeds of arms had ever in despair,

ever in despair > [only in the condition of despairing (his despair, Spenser's, or ours)]

8 Proud Braggadocchio, that in vaunting vain

vaunting > boasting vain > foolish; empty, insubstantial

9 His glory did repose, and credit did maintain.

repose > repose; trust credit > reputation; credibility maintain > maintain; defend

308.12

He seeing with that Chorle so faire a wight,
2 Decked with many a costly ornament,
Much merueiled thereat, as well he might,
4 And thought that match a fowle disparagement:
His bloudie speare eftsoones he boldly bent
6 Against the silly clowne, who dead through feare,
Fell streight to ground in great astonishment;
8 Villein (said he) this Ladie is my deare,
Dy, if thou it gainesay: I will away her beare.

1 He, seeing with that churl so fair a wight,

churl > bumpkin, boor, low fellow wight > creature, woman

2 Decked with many a costly ornament, 3 Much marvelled thereat, as well he might,

thereat > at that

4 And thought that match a foul disparagement:

disparagement > {Marriage to one of inferior rank; the disgrace occasioned by this}

5 His bloody spear eftsoons he boldly bent

eftsoons > thereupon bent > brought to bear

6 Against the silly clown, who, dead through fear,

silly > silly; helpless clown > yokel, peasant; clown

7 Fell straight to ground in great astonishment;

straight > straight; straightway astonishment > {Literal loss of sense or wits; loss of courage}

8 "Villein," said he, "this lady is my dear,

Villein > Villain; serf

9 Die, if you it gainsay: I will away her bear."

bear > carry; take [as a travelling companion: cf. 102.45:9]

308.13

The fearefull Chorle durst not gainesay, nor dooe,
2 But trembling stood, and yielded him the pray;
Who finding litle leasure her to wooe,
4 On Tromparts steed her mounted without stay,
And without reskew led her quite away.
6 Proud man himselfe then Braggadocchio deemed,
And next to none, after that happie day,
8 Being possessed of that spoyle, which seemed
The fairest wight on ground, and most of men esteemed.

1 The fearful churl dared not gainsay, nor do, 2 But trembling stood, and yielded him the prey; 3 Who, finding little leisure her to woo, 4 On Trompart's steed her mounted without stay,

steed > [shoulders: cf. 308.19:3] stay > delay; hesitation; hindrance

5 And without rescue led her quite away. 6 Proud man himself then Braggadocchio deemed, 7 And next to none, after that happy day,

next to none > second to none (next = behind) happy > fortunate; happy

8 Being possessed of that spoil, which seemed 9 The fairest wight on ground, and most of men esteemed.

wight > creature, woman on ground > in the world of > by

308.14

But when he saw himselfe free from poursute,
2 He gan make gentle purpose to his Dame,
With termes of loue and lewdnesse dissolute;
4 For he could well his glozing speaches frame
To such vaine vses, that him best became:
6 But she thereto would lend but light regard,
As seeming sory, that she euer came
8 Into his powre, that vsed her so hard,
To reaue her honor, which she more then life prefard.

1 But when he saw himself free from pursuit 2 He gan make gentle purpose to his dame,

gan > did; began to gentle purpose > courteous conversation

3 With terms of love and lewdness dissolute;

terms > words

4 For he could well his glozing speeches frame

glozing > flattering; coaxing, wheedling

5 To such vain uses, that him best became:

vain > foolish; empty

6 But she thereto would lend but light regard,

thereto > to that, to those

7 As seeming sorry that she ever came 8 Into his power, that used her so hard, 9 To reave her honour, which she more than life preferred.

reave > plunder, despoil

308.15

Thus as they two of kindnesse treated long,
2 There them by chaunce encountred on the way
An armed knight, vpon a courser strong,
4 Whose trampling feet vpon the hollow lay
Seemed to thunder, and did nigh affray
6 That Capons courage: yet he looked grim,
And fain'd to cheare his Ladie in dismay;
8 Who seem'd for feare to quake in euery lim,
And her to saue from outrage, meekely prayed him.

1 Thus as they two of kindness treated long,

kindness > love treated > discoursed, spoke

2 There them by chance encountered on the way 3 An armed knight, upon a courser strong,

An armed knight > (This is Sir Ferraugh; see 402.4:5-7)

4 Whose trampling feet upon the hollow lea

lea > ground

5 Seemed to thunder, and did nigh affray

affray > frighten away

6 That capon's courage: yet he looked grim,

capon > {Castrated cock}

7 And fained to cheer his lady in dismay;

fained > was anxious, tried; feigned

8 Who seemed for fear to quake in every limb, 9 And her to save from outrage, meekly prayed him.

prayed > entreated

308.16

Fiercely that stranger forward came, and nigh
2 Approching, with bold words and bitter threat,
Bad that same boaster, as he mote, on high
4 To leaue to him that Lady for excheat,
Or bide him battell without further treat.
6 That challenge did too peremptory seeme,
And fild his senses with abashment great;
8 Yet seeing nigh him ieopardy extreme,
He it dissembled well, and light seem'd to esteeme.

1 Fiercely that stranger forward came and, nigh 2 Approaching, with bold words and bitter threat 3 Bade that same boaster, as he might, on high,

might > could on high > aloud, hence: loudly; to heaven; from a height

4 To leave to him that lady for escheat,

escheat > {Forced contribution, plunder; property falling by right to the lord, king, or state}

5 Or bide him battle without further treat.

bide > offer treat > discussion

6 That challenge did too peremptory seem, 7 And filled his senses with abashment great;

abashment > confusion

8 Yet seeing nigh him jeopardy extreme, 9 He it dissembled well, and light seemed to esteem.

308.17

Saying, Thou foolish knight, that weenst with words
2 To steale away, that I with blowes haue wonne,
And brought throgh points of many perilous swords:
4 But if thee list to see thy Courser ronne,
Or proue thy selfe, this sad encounter shonne,
6 And seeke else without hazard of thy hed.
At those proud words that other knight begonne
8 To wexe exceeding wroth, and him ared
To turne his steede about, or sure he should be ded.

1 Saying, "You foolish knight, that weens with words

weens > supposes, thinks

2 To steal away that I with blows have won,

that > [that which]

3 And brought through points of many perilous swords: 4 But if you list to see your courser run,

list > please, choose run > [run in a joust; cf. 304.15:7, 307.38:8]

5 Or prove yourself, this sad encounter shun,

sad > grievous

6 And seek else, without hazard of your head."

else > {In another manner, place, or time; by other means; under other circumstances} of > to

7 At those proud words that other knight began 8 To wax exceeding wroth, and him aread

wax > grow aread > instructed

9 To turn his steed about, or sure he should be dead.

308.18

Sith then (said Braggadocchio) needes thou wilt
2 Thy dayes abridge, through proofe of puissance,
Turne we our steedes, that both in equall tilt
4 May meet againe, and each take happie chance.
This said, they both a furlongs mountenance
6 Retyrd their steeds, to ronne in euen race:
But Braggadocchio with his bloudie lance
8 Once hauing turnd, no more returnd his face,
But left his loue to losse, and fled himselfe apace.

1 "Sith then," said Braggadocchio, "needs you will

Sith > Since needs you will > you will of necessity

2 Your days abridge, through proof of puissance,

proof > trial, experience puissance > power, strength (allied to prowess in arms)

3 Turn we our steeds, that both in equal tilt

that > [so that] equal > impartial tilt > {Contest between two mounted knights with lances}

4 May meet again, and each take happy chance."

happy > fortunate

5 This said, they both a furlong's mountenance

furlong > {An eighth of a mile, 220 yards, about 201 metres} mountenance > distance

6 Retired their steeds, to run in even race: 7 But Braggadocchio with his bloody lance 8 Once having turned, no more returned his face,

returned > turned back

9 But left his love to loss, and fled himself apace.

apace > swiftly

308.19

The knight him seeing fly, had no regard
2 Him to poursew, but to the Ladie rode,
And hauing her from Trompart lightly reard,
4 Vpon his Courser set the louely lode,
And with her fled away without abode.
6 Well weened he, that fairest Florimell
It was, with whom in company he yode,
8 And so her selfe did alwaies to him tell;
So made him thinke him selfe in heauen, that was in hell.

1 The knight, him seeing fly, had no regard

fly > flee regard > care; interest

2 Him to pursue, but to the lady rode 3 And, having her from Trompart lightly reared,

lightly > easily, quickly

4 Upon his courser set the lovely load, 5 And with her fled away without abode.

abode > {The action of waiting}

6 Well weened he that fairest Florimell

weened > believed

7 It was, with whom in company he yode,

yode > went

8 And so herself did always to him tell;

so herself did always to him tell > [so she did always tell him; i.e. she did not disabuse him]

9 So made him think himself in heaven, that was in hell.

308.20

But Florimell her selfe was farre away,
2 Driuen to great distresse by Fortune straunge,
And taught the carefull Mariner to play,
4 Sith late mischaunce had her compeld to chaunge
The land for sea, at randon there to raunge:
6 Yet there that cruell Queene auengeresse,
Not satisfide so farre her to estraunge
8 From courtly blisse and wonted happinesse,
Did heape on her new waues of weary wretchednesse.

1 But Florimell herself was far away, 2 Driven to great distress by Fortune strange,

strange > extreme, severe

3 And taught the careful mariner to play,

careful > {Anxious, full of care} play > {Act; also: frolic with, have sexual dealings with}

4 Sith late mischance had her compelled to change

Sith > Since late > recent

5 The land for sea, at random there to range: 6 Yet there that cruel queen avengeress,

that cruel queen avengeress > [Fortune, Fortuna; "queen" = "goddess">[

7 Not satisfied so far her to estrange

so > thus (in extent); so (in time)

8 From courtly bliss and wonted happiness,

wonted > customary

9 Did heap on her new waves of weary wretchedness.

308.21

For being fled into the fishers bote,
2 For refuge from the Monsters crueltie,
Long so she on the mightie maine did flote,
4 And with the tide droue forward careleslie;
For th'aire was milde, and cleared was the skie,
6 And all his windes Dan Aeolus did keepe,
From stirring vp their stormy enmitie,
8 As pittying to see her waile and weepe;
But all the while the fisher did securely sleepe.

1 For, being fled into the fisher's boat,

fisher > fisherman

2 For refuge from the monster's cruelty, 3 Long so she on the mighty main did float,

so > thus main > main ocean, high sea; sea

4 And with the tide drove forward carelessly; 5 For the air was mild, and cleared was the sky, 6 And all his winds Dan Aeolus did keep

Dan > {Title of honour, as "Master", "Sir"}

7 From stirring up their stormy enmity, 8 As pitying to see her wail and weep;

As > [As though]

9 But all the while the fisher did securely sleep.

securely > carelessly, free from care; confidently

308.22

At last when droncke with drowsinesse, he woke,
2 And saw his drouer driue along the streame,
He was dismayd, and thrise his breast he stroke,
4 For maruell of that accident extreame;
But when he +saw+ that blazing beauties beame,
6 Which with rare light his bote did beautifie,
He marueild more, and thought he yet did dreame
8 Not well awakt, or that some extasie
Assotted had his sense, or dazed was his eie.

5 saw > saw, 1590, 1596

1 At last, when, drunk with drowsiness, he woke

drunk > [unsteady, intoxicated; or, perhaps: satiated]

2 And saw his drover drive along the stream,

drover > {Boat used for fishing with a drift-net} stream > current

3 He was dismayed, and thrice his breast he struck, 4 For marvel of that accident extreme;

accident > occurrence, happening

5 But when he saw that blazing beauty's beam, 6 Which with rare light his boat did beautify, 7 He marvelled more, and thought he yet did dream, 8 Not well awaked, or that some ecstasy

awaked > awoken, aroused; awake ecstasy > rapture

9 Assotted had his sense, or dazed was his eye.

Assotted > Infatuated; made a fool of, hence: deceived

308.23

But when her well auizing, he perceiued
2 To be no vision, nor fantasticke sight,
Great comfort of her presence he conceiued,
4 And felt in his old courage new delight
To gin awake, and stirre his frozen spright:
6 Tho rudely askt her, how she thither came.
Ah (said she) father, I note read aright,
8 What hard misfortune brought me to +the+ same;
Yet am I glad that here I now in safety +am+.

8 the > this 1590 9 am > ame 1590

1 But when her, well advising, he perceived

advising > observing, regarding

2 To be no vision, nor fantastic sight,

sight > vision

3 Great comfort of her presence he conceived,

comfort > renewal of strength of > of, from

4 And felt in his old courage new delight

courage > spirit; sexual desire

5 To gin awake, and stir his frozen spirit:

gin > begin to

6 Tho rudely asked her how she thither came.

Tho > Then rudely > roughly; rudely

7 "Ah," said she, "father, I no'te read aright

no'te read aright > cannot properly tell

8 What hard misfortune brought me to the same; 9 Yet am I glad that here I now in safety am.

308.24

But thou good man, sith farre in sea we bee,
2 And the great waters gin apace to swell,
That now no more we can the maine-land see,
4 Haue care, I pray, to guide the cock-bote well,
Least worse on sea then vs on land befell.
6 Thereat th'old man did nought but fondly grin,
And said, his boat the way could wisely tell:
8 But his deceiptfull eyes did neuer lin,
To looke on her faire face, and marke her snowy skin.

1 "But you, good man, sith far in sea we be,

sith > since

2 And the great waters begin apace to swell,

apace > quickly

3 That now no more we can the mainland see,

That > [So that]

4 Have care, I pray, to guide the cock-boat well,

cock-boat > {Small ship's boat; with the double meaning}

5 Lest worse on sea than us on land befell." 6 Thereat the old man did naught but fondly grin,

Thereat > At that; as a result of that fondly > foolishly; eagerly

7 And said his boat the way could wisely tell:

wisely > expertly

8 But his deceitful eyes did never lin

lin > cease

9 To look on her fair face, and mark her snowy skin.

mark > notice, observe (here also connoting "besmirch", "defile")

308.25

The sight whereof in his congealed flesh,
2 Infixt such secret sting of greedy lust,
That the drie withered stocke it gan refresh,
4 And kindled heat, that soone in flame forth brust:
The driest wood is soonest burnt to dust.
6 Rudely to her he lept, and his rough +hand+
Where ill became him, rashly would haue thrust,
8 But she with angry scorne him did withstond,
And shamefully +reproued+ for his rudenesse fond.

6 hand > hond sugg. Morris 9 reproued > reprou'd 1590

1 The sight whereof in his congealed flesh

whereof > of which congealed > frozen

2 Infixed such secret sting of greedy lust 3 That the dry withered stock it gan refresh,

gan > did

4 And kindled heat that soon in flame forth burst: 5 The driest wood is soonest burnt to dust. 6 Rudely to her he leapt, and his rough hand,

Rudely > Roughly; violently; ignobly

7 Where ill became him, rashly would have thrust,

ill > [it ill]

8 But she with angry scorn him did withstand, 9 And shamefully reproved for his rudeness fond.

rudeness > roughness; barbarism fond > foolish; idiotic

308.26

But he, that neuer good nor maners knew,
2 Her sharpe rebuke full litle did esteeme;
Hard is to teach an old horse amble trew.
4 The inward smoke, that did before but steeme,
Broke into open fire and rage extreme,
6 And now he strength gan adde vnto his will,
Forcing to doe, that did him fowle misseeme:
8 Beastly he threw her downe, ne car'd to spill
Her garments gay with scales of fish, that all did fill.

1 But he, that never good nor manners knew, 2 Her sharp rebuke full little did esteem;

full > very, exceedingly

3 Hard is to teach an old horse amble true.

amble true > [to] amble properly

4 The inward smoke, that did before but steam, 5 Broke into open fire and rage extreme,

rage > violent desire; sexual passion

6 And now he strength gan add to his will,

gan > did

7 Forcing to do that did him foul misseem:

Forcing > Using force that > [that which] foul misseem > foully misbecome

8 Beastly he threw her down, nor cared to spill

Beastly > Brutally to spill > [whether he spoiled]

9 Her garments gay with scales of fish, that all did fill.

all > [all the boat]

308.27

The silly virgin stroue him to withstand,
2 All that she might, and him in vaine reuild:
She struggled strongly both with foot and hand,
4 To saue her honor from that villaine vild,
And cride to heauen, from humane helpe exild.
6 O ye braue knights, that boast this Ladies loue,
Where be ye now, when she is nigh defild
8 Of filthy wretch? well may shee you reproue
Of falshood or of slouth, when most it may behoue.

1 The silly virgin strove him to withstand

silly > helpless; innocent

2 All that she might, and him in vain reviled:

might > could

3 She struggled strongly both with foot and hand, 4 To save her honour from that villain vile, 5 And cried to heaven, from human help exiled. 6 O you brave knights, that boast this lady's love,

boast > brag of; extol

7 Where be you now, when she is nigh defiled 8 Of filthy wretch? Well may she you reprove

Of > By [a]

9 Of falsehood or of sloth, when most it may behove.

may behove > [behoves you to come to her aid]

308.28

But if that thou, Sir Satyran, didst weete,
2 Or thou, Sir Peridure, her sorie state,
How soone would yee assemble many a fleete,
4 To fetch from sea, that ye at land lost late;
Towres, Cities, Kingdomes ye would ruinate,
6 In your auengement and dispiteous rage,
Ne ought your burning fury mote abate;
8 But if Sir Calidore could it presage,
No liuing creature could his cruelty asswage.

1 But if you, Sir Satyrane, did weet

weet > know; discover

2 (Or you, Sir Peridure) her sorry state,

Peridure > (The spelling indicates a meaning like "Endurance" or "He
Who Persists". Possibly the intended hero of an unknown book of
FQ)
sorry > painful, distressing

3 How soon would you assemble many a fleet, 4 To fetch from sea that you at land lost late;

that > [she whom] late > lately

5 Towers, cities, kingdoms, you would ruinate

ruinate > demolish; lay waste; overthrow

6 In your avengement and dispiteous rage,

avengement > vengeance dispiteous > pitiless

7 Nor aught your burning fury might abate;

might > could

8 But if Sir Calidore could it presage,

Calidore > "Beautiful Gift" (Greek); "Clever", "Skilful" (Latin callidus); "Hot", "Fiery", "Passionate" (Latin calidus. The latter meanings are the most appropriate here. Sir Calidore is the hero of Book VI) presage > {Have a presentiment of; hence: know of, hear about}

9 No living creature could his cruelty assuage.

308.29

But sith that none of all her knights is nye,
2 See how the heauens of voluntary grace,
And soueraine fauour towards chastity,
4 Doe succour send to her distressed cace:
So much high God doth innocence embrace.
6 It fortuned, whilest thus she stifly stroue,
And the wide sea importuned long space
8 With shrilling shriekes, Proteus abrode did roue,
Along the fomy waues driuing his finny droue.

1 But sith none of all her knights is nigh,

sith > since none > not one

2 See how the heavens, of voluntary grace

of > from, by

3 And sovereign favour towards chastity,

sovereign > supreme

4 Do succour send to her distressed case:

case > state; plight

5 So much high God does innocence embrace.

embrace > take in hand, include; hence: protect

6 It fortuned, whilst thus she stiffly strove,

stiffly > strongly, violently; resolutely

7 And the wide sea importuned long space

long space > [for a] long time

8 With shrilling shrieks, Proteus abroad did rove, 9 Along the foamy waves driving his finny drove.

drove > {A number of beasts driven in a body, usually sheep, oxen, etc., but here, seals}

308.30

Proteus is Shepheard of the seas of yore,
2 And hath the charge of Neptunes mightie heard;
An aged sire with head all +frory+ hore,
4 And sprinckled frost vpon his deawy beard:
Who when those pittifull outcries he heard,
6 Through all the seas so ruefully resound,
His charet swift in haste he thither steard,
8 Which with a teeme of scaly Phocas bound
Was drawne vpon the waues, that fomed him around.

3 frory > frowy 1590, 1596; cf. 308.35:2

1 Proteus is shepherd of the seas of yore,

yore > old

2 And has the charge of Neptune's mighty herd; 3 An aged sire, with head all frory hoar,

sire > {Father, elderly man} frory > foamy (with connotation of the primary sense, "frosty") hoar > {Venerable with age; ancient; silver-grey like hoar-frost}

4 And sprinkled frost upon his dewy beard:

frost > {The colour of frost: silver, silver-grey}

5 Who when those pitiful outcries he heard

outcries > {Cryings out}

6 Through all the seas so ruefully resound,

ruefully > pitiably

7 His charet swift in haste he thither steered,

charet > chariot

8 Which with a team of scaly phocas bound

phocas bound > harnessed seals ("bound" may also indicate metaphorical bonds, as of duty and obligation)

9 Was drawn upon the waves that foamed him around.

him around > [around him]

308.31

And comming to that Fishers wandring bote,
2 That went at will, withouten carde or sayle,
He therein saw that yrkesome sight, which smote
4 Deepe indignation and compassion frayle
Into his hart attonce: streight did he hayle
6 The greedy villein from his hoped pray,
Of which he now did very litle fayle,
8 And with his staffe, that driues his Heard astray,
Him bet so sore, that life and sense did much dismay.

1 And coming to that fisher's wandering boat,

fisher > fisherman wandering > (Includes the sense "errant", "deviating from the true course": cf. 206.10:2)

2 That went at will, without card or sail,

card > chart

3 He therein saw that irksome sight, which smote

irksome > distressing; loathsome

4 Deep indignation and compassion frail

frail > tender (SUS)

5 Into his heart at once: straight did he hale

at once > simultaneously; at once straight > straightway, unreservedly; strait: strictly hale > drag

6 The greedy villein from his hoped prey,

villein > villain; serf hoped > [hoped-for]

7 Of which he now did very little fail,

fail > lack (fail of = miss)

8 And with his staff, that drives his herd astray,

astray > [when they are astray; hence: when they stray from their proper course]

9 Him beat so sore that life and sense did much dismay.

sore > grievously; sore life > [he his] life dismay > {Overcome, defeat by sudden onslaught}

308.32

The whiles the pitteous Ladie vp did ryse,
2 Ruffled and fowly raid with filthy soyle,
And blubbred face with teares of her faire eyes:
4 Her heart nigh broken was with weary toyle,
To saue her selfe from that outrageous spoyle,
6 But when she looked vp, to weet, what wight
+Had her from so infamous fact assoyld,+
8 For shame, but more for feare of his grim sight,
Downe in her lap she hid her face, and loudly shright.

7 Had her from so infamous fact assoyld, > Did her from so infamous fact assoyle, conj. Church

1 The whiles the piteous lady up did rise,

The whiles > Meanwhile piteous > {Worthy of or exciting pity}

2 Ruffled and foully berayed with filthy soil,

berayed > defiled; bespattered soil > earth, soil, hence: muck

3 And blubbered face with tears of her fair eyes:

blubbered > {Swollen or stained with tears}

4 Her heart nigh broken was with weary toil, 5 To save herself from that outrageous spoil,

outrageous > outrageous; violent spoil > {Pillage, rapine; act of spoiling or damaging}

6 But when she looked up, to weet what wight

weet > discover, learn wight > person, creature

7 Had her from so infamous fact assoiled,

so > [such an] fact > deed, crime assoiled > set free, rescued (catachr.)

8 For shame, but more for fear of his grim sight,

grim sight > formidable appearance

9 Down in her lap she hid her face, and loudly shright.

shright > shrieked

308.33

Her selfe not saued yet from daunger dred
2 She thought, but chaung'd from one to other feare;
Like as a fearefull Partridge, that is fled
4 From the sharpe Hauke, which her attached neare,
And fals to ground, to seeke for succour theare,
6 Whereas the hungry Spaniels she does spy,
With greedy iawes her readie for to teare;
8 In such distresse and sad perplexity
Was Florimell, when Proteus she did see +thereby+.

9 thereby > her by 1590

1 Herself not saved yet from danger dread

danger dread > [dreadful danger]

2 She thought, but changed from one to other fear;

fear > [source of fear: cf. 106.10:9]

3 Like a fearful partridge that is fled 4 From the sharp hawk, which her attached near,

sharp > hungry, eager for prey attached near > nearly seized

5 And falls to ground, to seek succour there, 6 Where the hungry spaniels she does spy,

spaniel > (This breed is used for starting and retrieving small game)

7 With greedy jaws her ready to tear;

greedy > eager

8 In such distress and sad perplexity

sad > grievous; sad perplexity > perplexity; distress

9 Was Florimell, when Proteus she did see thereby.

thereby > there, adjacent; hence: beside her

308.34

But he endeuoured with speeches milde
2 Her to recomfort, and accourage bold,
Bidding her feare no more her foeman vilde,
4 Nor doubt himselfe; and who he was, her told.
Yet all that could not from affright her hold,
6 Ne to recomfort her at all preuayld;
For her faint heart was with the frozen cold
8 Benumbd so inly, that her wits nigh fayld,
And all her senses with abashment quite were quayld.

1 But he endeavoured with speeches mild

mild > mild, kind; gracious

2 Her to recomfort, and accourage bold,

recomfort > console; inspire with fresh courage accourage > encourage (WUFQ)

3 Bidding her fear no more her foeman vile,

foeman > enemy

4 Nor doubt himself; and who he was her told.

doubt > fear; doubt

5 Yet all that could not from affright her hold,

affright > terror hold > preserve

6 Nor to recomfort her at all prevailed; 7 For her faint heart was with the frozen cold 8 Benumbed so inly that her wits nigh failed,

inly > inwardly

9 And all her senses with abashment quite were quailed.

abashment > confusion quailed > broken down; spoiled, impaired

308.35

Her vp betwixt his rugged hands he reard,
2 And with his frory lips full softly kist,
Whiles the cold ysickles from his rough beard,
4 Dropped adowne vpon her yuorie brest:
Yet he himselfe so busily addrest,
6 That her out of astonishment he wrought,
And out of that same fishers filthy nest
8 Remouing her, into his charet brought,
And there with many gentle termes her faire besought.

1 Her up betwixt his rugged hands he reared,

rugged > coarse, rough, unrefined; hairy

2 And with his frory lips full softly kissed,

frory > foamy (with connotation of the primary sense, "frosty") full > very kissed > [kissed her]

3 While the cold icicles from his rough beard 4 Dropped adown upon her ivory breast:

adown > down

5 Yet he himself so busily addressed

addressed > applied

6 That her out of astonishment he wrought,

astonishment > {Loss of sense or wits} wrought > worked; hence: brought

7 And out of that same fisher's filthy nest 8 Removing her, into his charet brought,

charet > chariot

9 And there with many gentle terms her fair besought.

terms > words

308.36

But that old leachour, which with bold assault
2 That beautie durst presume to violate,
He cast to punish for his hainous fault;
4 Then tooke he him yet trembling sith of late,
And tyde behind his charet, to aggrate
6 The virgin, whom he had abusde so sore:
So drag'd him through the waues in scornefull state,
8 And after cast him vp, vpon the shore;
But Florimell with him vnto his bowre he bore.

1 But that old lecher, who with bold assault 2 That beauty dared presume to violate, 3 He cast to punish for his heinous fault;

cast > decided fault > offence, transgression

4 Then took he him, yet trembling sith of late,

yet > still sith of late > since recently (i.e. since his drubbing)

5 And tied behind his charet, to aggrate

charet > chariot aggrate > gratify (SUS)

6 The virgin, whom he had abused so sore: 7 So dragged him through the waves in scornful state, 8 And after cast him up upon the shore; 9 But Florimell with him to his bower he bore.

bower > dwelling

308.37

His bowre is in the bottome of the maine,
2 Vnder a mightie rocke, gainst which do raue
The roaring billowes in their proud disdaine,
4 That with the angry working of the waue,
Therein is eaten out an hollow caue,
6 That seemes rough Masons hand with engines keene
Had long while laboured it to engraue:
8 There was his wonne, ne liuing wight was seene,
Saue one old Nymph, +hight+ Panope to keepe it cleane.

9 hight > high 1590

1 His bower is in the bottom of the main,

bower > dwelling main > main ocean, high sea; sea

2 Under a mighty rock, gainst which do rave

gainst > against

3 The roaring billows in their proud disdain,

disdain > anger; malice, resentment

4 That with the angry working of the wave

That > [So that]

5 Therein is eaten out a hollow cave,

hollow > hollow; insincere, false, hungry

6 That seems rough mason's hand with engines keen

engines > tools; machines keen > sharp

7 Had long while laboured, it to engrave:

engrave > sculpture; hence: carve out

8 There was his won, nor living wight was seen,

won > dwelling-place wight > creature

9 Save one old nymph, hight Panope, to keep it clean.

nymph > {Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, trees, mountains. This one is a nereid, a sea-nymph} hight > named Panope > "All Seeing" (Greek; she sees all the deeds enacted under her master's roof. She reappears at 411.49:8, and see Hesiod, Theogony 250)

308.38

Thither he brought the sory Florimell,
2 And entertained her the best he might
And Panope her entertaind eke well,
4 As an immortall mote a mortall wight,
To winne her liking vnto his delight:
6 With flattering words he sweetly wooed her,
And offered faire gifts t'allure her sight,
8 But she both offers and the offerer
Despysde, and all the fawning of the flatterer.

1 Thither he brought the sorry Florimell,

sorry > {Distressed; full of grief}

2 And entertained her the best he might;

might > could

3 And Panope her entertained eke well,

eke > in addition

4 As an immortal might a mortal wight,

wight > woman

5 To win her liking to his delight:

win > persuade liking > inclination, approval, consent

6 With flattering words he sweetly wooed her, 7 And offered fair gifts to allure her sight, 8 But she both offers and the offerer 9 Despised, and all the fawning of the flatterer.

308.39

Daily he tempted her with this or that,
2 And neuer suffred her to be at rest:
But euermore she him refused flat,
4 And all his fained kindnesse did +detest,+
So firmely she had sealed vp her brest.
6 Sometimes he boasted, that a God he hight:
But she a mortall creature loued best:
8 Then he would make himselfe a mortall wight;
But then she said she lou'd none, but a Faerie knight.

4 detest, > detest. 1596

1 Daily he tempted her with this or that, 2 And never suffered her to be at rest:

suffered > allowed

3 But evermore she him refused flat, 4 And all his feigned kindness did detest,

feigned kindness > feigned kindness; dissimulated love ("kindness" in the sense found at 308.15:1)

5 So firmly she had sealed up her breast. 6 Sometimes he boasted that a god he hight:

hight > was called

7 But she a mortal creature loved best: 8 Then he would make himself a mortal wight;

wight > man

9 But then she said she loved none but a Faery knight.

none > no one

308.40

Then like a Faerie knight himselfe he drest;
2 For euery shape on him he could endew:
Then like a king he was to her exprest,
4 And offred kingdomes vnto her in vew,
To be his Leman and his Ladie trew:
6 But when all this he nothing saw preuaile,
With harder meanes he cast her to subdew,
8 And with sharpe threates her often did assaile,
So thinking for to make her stubborne courage quaile.

1 Then like a Faery knight himself he dressed;

dressed > dressed; arrayed (with armour, etc.)

2 For every shape on him he could endue:

endue > put on (as a garment)

3 Then like a king he was to her expressed,

expressed > portrayed

4 And offered kingdoms to her in view,

in view > in her view; or, lacking the final comma: with the object, hence: to prevail upon her

5 To be his leman and his lady true:

leman > lover, mistress

6 But when all this he nothing saw prevail,

nothing > not in the least prevail > avail; prevail

7 With harder means he cast her to subdue,

cast > resolved

8 And with sharp threats her often did assail,

sharp > sharp (probably with connotation of the meaning at 308.33:4)

9 So thinking to make her stubborn courage quail.

So > In this manner courage > spirit

308.41

To dreadfull shapes he did himselfe transforme,
2 Now like a Gyant, now like to a feend,
Then like a Centaure, then like to a storme,
4 Raging within the waues: thereby he weend
Her will to win vnto his wished +end+.
6 But when with feare, nor fauour, nor with all
He else could doe, he saw himselfe esteemd,
8 Downe in a Dongeon deepe he let her fall,
And threatned there to make her his eternall thrall.

5 end > eend 1590

1 To dreadful shapes he did himself transform, 2 Now like a giant, now like a fiend, 3 Then like a centaur, then like a storm

centaur > {Fabulous creature with the head, arms and trunk of a man and the lower parts of a horse}

4 Raging within the waves: thereby he weened

weened > thought, supposed

5 Her will to win to his wished end.

win > persuade

6 But when with fear, nor favour, nor with all

with fear > [neither with fear]

7 He else could do, he saw himself esteemed,

else > otherwise

8 Down in a dungeon deep he let her fall, 9 And threatened there to make her his eternal thrall.

thrall > slave

308.42

Eternall thraldome was to her more liefe,
2 Then losse of chastitie, or chaunge of loue:
Die had she rather in tormenting griefe,
4 Then any should of falsenesse her reproue,
Or loosenesse, that she lightly did remoue.
6 Most vertuous virgin, glory be thy meed,
And crowne of heauenly praise with Saints aboue,
8 Where most sweet hymmes of this thy famous deed
Are still emongst them song, that far my rymes exceed.

1 Eternal thraldom was to her more lief

thraldom > captivity, slavery lief > agreeable, acceptable

2 Than loss of chastity, or change of love: 3 Die had she rather in tormenting grief

Die had she rather > [She would rather have died]

4 Than any should of falseness her reprove,

Than > [Than that] reprove > condemn

5 Or looseness, that she lightly did remove.

that > [in that] remove > [remove her love from Marinell]

6 Most virtuous virgin, glory be your meed,

meed > reward

7 And crown of heavenly praise with saints above, 8 Where most sweet hymns of this your famous deed 9 Are still amongst them sung, that far my rhymes exceed.

exceed > surpass

308.43

Fit song of Angels caroled to bee;
2 But yet what so my feeble Muse can frame,
Shall be t'aduance thy goodly chastitee,
4 And to enroll thy memorable name,
In th'heart of euery honourable Dame,
6 That they thy vertuous deedes may imitate,
And be partakers of thy endlesse fame.
8 It yrkes me, leaue thee in this wofull state,
To tell of Satyrane, where I him left of late.

1 Fit song of angels carolled to be;

of > by carolled > sung

2 But yet whatso my feeble Muse can frame

whatso > whatever frame > give expression to, compose

3 Shall be to advance your goodly chastity

advance > extol

4 And to enrol your memorable name 5 In the heart of every honourable dame, 6 That they your virtuous deeds may imitate,

That > [So that]

7 And be partakers of your endless fame.

partakers of > participants in; sharers of

8 It irks me leave you in this woeful state,

irks > troubles; shames leave > [to leave]

9 To tell of Satyrane, where I him left of late.

308.44

Who hauing ended with that Squire of Dames
2 A long discourse of his aduentures vaine,
The which himselfe, then Ladies more defames,
4 And finding not th'Hyena to be slaine,
With that same Squire, returned backe againe
6 To his first way. And as they forward went,
They spyde a knight faire pricking on the plaine,
8 As if he were on some aduenture bent,
And in his port appeared manly hardiment.

1 Who, having ended with that Squire of Dames 2 A long discourse of his adventures vain,

vain > foolish; futile

3 Which himself, than ladies more defame, 4 And finding not the hyena to be slain,

hyena > (The monster is described only as "likest" to a hyena at 307.22:8)

5 With that same squire returned back again 6 To his first way. And, as they forward went, 7 They spied a knight fair pricking on the plain,

fair > handsome, good-looking (qualifying the knight); expertly, becomingly (qualifying "pricking") pricking > spurring his horse, riding

8 As if he were on some adventure bent,

bent > bound

9 And in his port appeared manly hardiment.

port > deportment, bearing (i.e. hardiment is discernible in his demeanour) hardiment > hardihood; boldness

308.45

Sir Satyrane him towards did addresse,
2 To weet, what wight he was, and what his quest:
And comming nigh, eftsoones he gan to +gesse+
4 Both by the burning hart, which on his brest
He bare, and by the colours in his crest,
6 That Paridell it was. Tho to him yode,
And him saluting, as beseemed best,
8 Gan first inquire of tydings farre abrode;
And afterwardes, on what aduenture now he rode.

3 gesse > ghesse 1609

1 Sir Satyrane him towards did address,

address > betake himself, go

2 To weet what wight he was, and what his quest:

weet > find out wight > man

3 And coming nigh, eftsoons he began to guess,

eftsoons > soon

4 Both by the burning heart (which on his breast 5 He bore) and by the colours in his crest, 6 That Paridell it was. Tho to him yode,

Paridell > (This is his first appearance in the poem; he is known to
Satyrane, but not to us)
Tho > Then
yode > went

7 And him saluting, as beseemed best,

beseemed best > was most fitting

8 Gan first inquire of tidings far abroad;

Gan > Did

9 And afterwards, on what adventure now he rode.

308.46

Who thereto answering, said; The tydings bad,
2 Which now in Faerie court all men do tell,
Which turned hath great mirth, to mourning sad,
4 Is the late ruine of proud Marinell,
And suddein parture of faire Florimell,
6 To find him forth: and after her are gone
All the braue knights, that doen in armes excell,
8 To sauegard her, ywandred all alone;
Emongst the rest my lot (vnworthy) is to be one.

1 Who thereto answering, said: "The tidings bad,

thereto > to that

2 Which now in Faery court all men do tell, 3 Which turned has great mirth to mourning sad,

has > (The singular verb with the plural "tidings" was formerly not unusual)

4 Is the late ruin of proud Marinell,

late ruin > recent downfall

5 And sudden departure of fair Florimell 6 To find him forth: and after her are gone 7 All the brave knights that do in arms excel,

brave > brave; splendid arms > {Deeds of arms}

8 To safeguard her, wandered all alone; 9 Amongst the rest my lot (unworthy) is to be one."

308.47

Ah gentle knight (said then Sir Satyrane)
2 Thy labour all is lost, I greatly dread,
That hast a thanklesse seruice on thee ta'ne,
4 And offrest sacrifice vnto the dead:
For dead, I +surely+ doubt, thou maist aread
6 Henceforth for euer Florimell to be,
That all the noble knights of Maydenhead,
8 Which her ador'd, may sore repent with me,
And all faire Ladies may for euer sory be.

5 surely > sorely sugg. Upton; see 308.48:6

1 "Ah, gentle knight," said then Sir Satyrane,

gentle > noble

2 "Your labour all is lost, I greatly dread, 3 That have a thankless service on you taken,

That > [In that you]

4 And offer sacrifice to the dead: 5 For dead, I sorely doubt, you may aread

sorely > (Following Upton's suggestion: see Textual Appendix) doubt > fear aread > adjudge; declare

6 Henceforth for ever Florimell to be, 7 That all the noble knights of Maidenhead,

That > [So that; or: that sad fact] Maidenhead > (A reference to the Order of the Garter, the highest chivalric order of English knighthood, instituted c. 1344; the sovereign (i.e. Elizabeth I, the Virgin Queen) is head of the order)

8 Which her adored, may sore repent with me,

sore > grievously

9 And all fair ladies may for ever sorry be."

308.48

Which words when Paridell had heard, his hew
2 Gan greatly chaunge, and seem'd dismayd to bee;
Then said, Faire Sir, how may I weene it trew,
4 That ye doe tell in such vncertaintee?
Or speake ye of report, or did ye see
6 Iust cause of dread, that makes ye doubt so sore?
For perdie else how mote it euer bee,
8 That euer hand should dare for to engore
Her noble bloud? the heauens such crueltie abhore.

1 Which words when Paridell had heard, his hue

hue > colour; appearance

2 Gan greatly change, and seemed dismayed to be;

Gan > Did

3 Then said, "Fair sir, how may I ween it true,

ween > believe

4 That you do tell in such uncertainty?

That > [That which]

5 Or speak you of report, or did you see

Or > Either; hence: do report > rumour, [a] rumour

6 Just cause of dread, that makes you doubt so sore?

doubt > fear

7 For pardie else how might it ever be

pardie > truly, "by God" else > otherwise might > could

8 That ever hand should dare to engore

engore > make gory [cause blood to coagulate by shedding it]

9 Her noble blood? The heavens such cruelty abhor."

308.49

These eyes did see, that they will euer rew
2 +T'haue+ seene, (quoth he) when as a monstrous beast
The Palfrey, whereon she did trauell, slew,
4 And of his bowels made +his bloudie+ feast:
Which speaking token sheweth at the least
6 Her certaine losse, if not her sure decay:
Besides, that more suspition encreast,
8 I found her golden girdle cast astray,
Distaynd with durt and bloud, as relique of the pray.

2 T'haue > To haue 1590 4 his bloudie > a bloudy 1609

1 "These eyes did see (that they will ever rue 2 To have seen)," quoth he, "when a monstrous beast 3 The palfrey, whereon she did travel, slew,

palfrey > {Saddle-horse for ladies} whereon > on which

4 And of his bowels made his bloody feast: 5 Which speaking token shows at the least 6 Her certain loss, if not her sure decay:

decay > death

7 Besides, that more suspicion increased,

that more > [and that more greatly my]

8 I found her golden girdle cast astray, 9 Distained with dirt and blood, as relic of the prey."

Distained > Stained, sullied prey > {Act of preying, as 307.36:6}

308.50

Aye me, (said Paridell) the signes be sad,
2 And but God turne the same to good soothsay,
That Ladies safetie is sore to be drad:
4 Yet will I not forsake my forward way,
Till triall doe more certaine truth bewray.
6 Faire Sir (quoth he) well may it you succeed,
Ne long shall Satyrane behind you stay,
8 But to the rest, which in this Quest proceed
My labour adde, and be partaker of their speed.

1 "Ay me," said Paridell, "the signs be sad,

Ay me > Ah me! Alas! (chiefly in northern dialect) be > [are] sad > ill-omened; grievous

2 And but God turn the same to good soothsay,

but > unless good soothsay > [a] favourable omen

3 That lady's safety is sore to be dreaded: 4 Yet will I not forsake my forward way,

forward > forward (in direction); eager

5 Till trial do more certain truth bewray."

trial > inquiry bewray > reveal

6 "Fair sir," quoth he, "well may it you succeed,

succeed > succeed in; give success to

7 Nor long shall Satyrane behind you stay, 8 But to the rest which in this quest proceed

rest > [of the Faery knights]

9 My labour add, and be partaker of their speed."

add > [I shall add] partaker of > [a] participant in, [a] sharer of speed > success; speed; promptness

308.51

Ye noble knights (said then the Squire of Dames)
2 Well may ye speed in so praiseworthy paine:
But sith the Sunne now ginnes to slake his beames,
4 In deawy vapours of the westerne maine,
And lose the teme out of his weary waine,
6 Mote not mislike you also to abate
Your zealous hast, till morrow next againe
8 Both light of heauen, and strength of men relate:
Which if ye please, to yonder castle turne your gate.

1 "You noble knights," said then the Squire of Dames, 2 "Well may you speed in so praiseworthy pain:

speed > succeed, thrive so > [such a] pain > effort

3 But sith the sun now begins to slake his beams

sith > since

4 In dewy vapours of the western main,

main > sea

5 And loosen the team out of his weary wain,

team > [team of horses] wain > chariot (in which Phoebus Apollo makes his daily journey across the sky)

6 Might not mislike you also to abate

not mislike > [it] not displease

7 Your zealous haste, till morrow next again 8 Both light of heaven, and strength of men relates:

relates > brings back, restores (SU)

9 Which if you please, to yonder castle turn your gate."

you please > [this advice you pleases] gate > way, journey (closely cognate with "gait"); hence: course

308.52

That counsell pleased well; so all yfere
2 Forth marched to a Castle them before,
Where soone arriuing, they restrained were
4 Of readie entrance, which ought euermore
To errant knights be +commun+: wondrous sore
6 Thereat displeasd they were, till that young Squire
Gan them informe the cause, why that same dore
8 Was shut to all, which lodging did desire:
The which to let you weet, will further time require.

5 commun > commune 1590

1 That counsel pleased well; so all yfere

yfere > together

2 Forth marched to a castle them before, 3 Where, soon arriving, they restrained were

restrained > deprived

4 Of ready entrance, which ought evermore 5 To errant knights be common: wondrous sore

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating) common > generally accessible; hence: freely available

6 Thereat displeased they were, till that young squire

Thereat > Because of that, at that

7 Gan them inform the cause why that same door

Gan > Did cause > reason

8 Was shut to all which lodging did desire: 9 Which, to let you weet, will further time require.

weet > discover, learn