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3. [an outside] for one outside
5. [here, & a curve there threw] for in one, & a curve in the other gave
6. [to] added above line after them
9. [clusters (rows erased) of fine Elms, or rows of old Thorns] for vigorous Elms, or old Thorns & Hollies
10. [line] for course
12. [vacant spaces] for intervals
16. [over the pales] erased after Womanish and added above line after glimpse
20. [decidedly] for distinctly
21. [in spite of the Mist] for though at some distance before her