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1. sloping erased before [bank]
2. at (?) erased after [Paling &]
3. [Path] for track
8. that erased after [felt]
12. [her] added above line after strike
14. [must not] for ought not to
16. of it erased after [nothing]
[discerned] for seen
17. [If Charlotte had not been] over she was erased
19. or erased after [the two]