(touch other persons.” Krihsnù replied, “I will summon all the) to Krishnù.
“and the cowherdessess and cowherds, to celebrate with songs” to cowherdesses.
[Chapter XLVI]
“We will accomplish, whatever you may order us to perform.” Delete the comma.
“First of all send an invitation to all their brethen” to brethren.
“there is a demon, named Sunkasoor, in the form of a shell” to Sunkhasoor.
[Chapter XLVII]
“I will give an account now how Shree Kishnù Chund brought” to Krishnù.
(whether they still continued to love him Nund added, “Give me) add period after him.
“although other bees buz over it during the whole night” to buzz.