“and that on what sidesoever we look, there you are presented” to side soever.
[Chapter LXXXIX]
“prepared to be burnt upon it with his bow and arows having then” to arrows.
“upon the head of the king of the serpent face was an ornamented throne” to race.
“flowers reaching to his feet, and a pearl of necklace” to necklace of pearls.
[Chapter XC]
“holy and virtuous men sung, the praises of Huri during the eight watches” delete the comma.
“surpassed the other, how shall I attempt to describe them.” change period to question mark.
“Whatever benefit is derived from, religious penance, sacrifice, gifts, fasting, pilgrimage” delete comma after from.
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