“she sank sensless to the ground” to senseless.
“When he saw that he was only fainting” to she. (It was Joy who fainted, not a male character.)
[Chapter VI]
“the overwhelming impulses of mother-hood” to motherhood.
“he was painfuly conscious of his” to painfully.
[Chapter VII]
“he felt horribly dissappointed” to disappointed.
“She spoke in a gay debonnair manner” to debonair.
[Chapter VIII]
“the forthcoming visit to Eurpoe” to Europe.