“and the accumulation of of merits (punyaskandha)” delete one of.
“Every one of these seeds which are infinte in number” to infinite.
[Chapter IX]
“than devastation, barreness, and universal misery” to barrenness.
“Even so with the Dharkâya of the Tathâgata” to Dharmakâya.
“Even so with the Dharmakâya of theT athâgata” to the Tathâgata.
“such as blindness, deafness, mental abberration, etc.” to aberration.
“It anthroposises everything beyond the proper measure” to anthropomorphises.
[Chapter X]
([p. 243, fn. 1]) “the Eastern Tsin dynasty (A.D, 371-420)” change the comma to a period.