“love is a Buddha-dharma, wisdom is a Buddha dharma” to Buddha-dharma.
“emancipation of the Çrâvaka or of the Prayekabuddha” to Pratyekabuddha.
“hearts are not softened at the sight of others, misfortune and suffering” change the comma to a (possessive) apostrophe.
“he does not believe that universal emanciipation” to emancipation.
“but that thay obtain reality in their oneness with” to they.
“do not pay homage to the congregration of holy men” to congregation.
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“Devoid of all liminations” to limitations.
“None is there but that enters upon Buddh a-knowledge” to Buddha-knowledge.
“All senient beings in transmigration travel through” to sentient.