3 Neither ladies' loves, nor sweet entreaties might

might > could

4 Appease his heat, or hasty passage stay;

Appease > Assuage heat > fit of passion

5 For he has vowed to be avenged that day 6 (That day itself him seemed all too long)

him seemed > [seemed to him]

7 On him that did Pyrochles dear dismay:

dear > grievously (adv.); dear, beloved (adj.) dismay > defeat, overcome

8 So proudly pricks on his courser strong,

pricks on > spurs on