3 That, like two orient pearls, did purely shine

two > (See Textual Appendix. If Hughes's conjecture is accepted, this word should be removed from the Shadow Text) orient > (Coming from the Orient; best quality, having a special lustre; brilliant, lustrous, sparkling)

4 Upon her snowy cheek; and therewithal

therewithal > therewith, with that

5 She sighed soft, that none so bestial,

that none > [so that no one]

6 Nor savage heart, but ruth of her sad plight

savage > [a] savage ruth > pity sad > sad; grievous

7 Would make to melt, or piteously appal;

piteously > [by means of feeling pity] appal > quell