8 That of no envious eyes he might be spied:

That of > [So that by] envious > malevolent

9 For, doubtless, death ensued if any him descried.

ensued > [would have ensued]

105.53

Scarse could he footing find in that fowle way,
2 For many corses, like a great Lay-stall
Of murdred men which therein strowed lay,
4 Without remorse, or decent funerall:
Which all through that great Princesse pride did fall
6 And came to shamefull end. And them beside
Forth ryding vnderneath the castell wall,
8 A donghill of dead carkases he spide,
The dreadfull spectacle of that sad house of Pride.

1 Scarce could he footing find in that foul way, 2 For many corses, like a great laystall

For > [Because of the] corses > bodies laystall > {Place where bodies are laid; dunghill, midden}

3 Of murdered men, who therein strewn lay, 4 Without remorse or decent funeral:

remorse > pity