Page 12, "Richtofen" changed to "Richthofen" (fighting, von Richthofen should)
Page 19, comma added (first Richthofen, his cousin)
Page 20, "Shickfuss" changed to "Schickfuss" (great-grandfather Schickfuss fell)
Page 28, period changed to a comma (the breakage, I rode)
Page 35, "prisoner. He" changed to "prisoner, he" (prisoner, he told)
Page 37, "communique" changed to "communiqué" (first official communiqué.)
Page 42, the text for the sub-chapter has 1915 in the date. As two chapters away he is in June 1915, this "21-22nd August, 1915" has been changed to "21-22nd August, 1914" (21-22nd August, 1914)
Page 58, repeated word "a" removed from text. Original read (like a a little toy)
Page 63, "particularly" changed to "particularity" (rare talent and patricularity)
Page 68, repeated line "gradually to a stop and suddenly I was" was deleted the original read: