Unimpressive. Yesterday I saw Mrs. Hamlin in a new car designed by the Fisher company. Almost all cars designed by them are distinctive.
Better. Yesterday I saw Mrs. Hamlin in a new car designed by the Fisher company. Almost all cars designed by that company are distinctive.
Revise. Silos made of concrete are of greater value than any other kind because they last longer. This is easy to use and is cheaper in the end than any other material.
406. Place adverbs like only, almost, ever, nearly, just, hardly, scarcely, merely, quite next to and usually before the words they modify.
Misleading. He would only lend me five dollars.
Accurate. He would lend me only five dollars.
Revise. I don’t ever want to see him again.
407. Place negatives before the words they modify.
Untaught. Everybody has not read the Bible.