Revise. Great stress will be laid upon the application of these tests in the future; the people of this country spend millions of dollars each year in giving musical training to children who have no talent for music.
514. Write simply.
Affected. Suffice it, that I am saving the best for the last.
Natural. I am saving the best for the last.
Revise. The river is too cold for careless plunges, and death-dealing cramps and chills may lead to drownings for those who beware not the perils that lie in April waters.
515. Avoid the use of far-fetched synonyms.
Silly. Fraternities can be a great force for the good of the college and for the good of the Greek letter man.
Natural. Fraternities can be a great force for the good of the college and for the good of the fraternity man.
Revise. More interest is being shown in the manly art this year than has been shown in any past season.
516. Be definite and particular.