Revise. I want to most emphatically state that I do not believe a Union of South America is possible.

Revise. Appointment of George Hanby and Walter G. Phillips to confer with the president concerning the loan that is being made by the trustees to aid worthy students in meeting their necessary college expenses was made Wednesday.

512. Put the main idea in the main clause.

Characterless. The first talk of the series was given Tuesday morning, in which he made the point that it is man’s nature to pray.

Animated. Tuesday morning in the first talk of the series he made the point that it is man’s nature to pray.

Revise. He had saved $1,500,000 when one day his office boy ushered in a man who showed him a diamond of great value.

513. Put a subordinate idea into a subordinate construction.

Ungainly. Peet took Mead’s place at halfback last night and scored two touchdowns.

Graphic. After taking Mead’s place at halfback last night Peet scored two touchdowns.