10.  for the House

11. [first required to take that direction] for required to turn that way

15. [to pass by] for to pass two minutes before

[He had grumbled & shaken his shoulders so much indeed, and pitied & cut his Horses so sharply] for grumbling so much indeed, & looking so black, & pitying & cutting his Horses so much

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6. [not his Masters] written above not the Gentleman’s own (but only not is erased)

7. [had] added above line

[indisputably become considerably worse] for indisputably & evidently become much worse

10. passed erased before [left behind]

[expressing (saying erased) with a most intelligent (and seeming erased) portentous countenance] written over as Bad as it had been before the Change seemed to say