13. [could safely proceed] for had ever thought of proceeding

16. Travellors beleived found themselves at first only shaken & bruised erased before [Gentleman]

18. [at first] added above line

21. [soon] added above line

22. [in a few moments] erased after of it and added above line after obliged

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2. self erased before [congratulations] and [to his wife & himself] added above line

13. [the] for a before neat-looking

14. appearing erased after [Cottage]

15. peeping out from among wood, and erased before [romantically]