12. [vacant spaces] for intervals
16. [over the pales] erased after Womanish and added above line after glimpse
20. [decidedly] for distinctly
21. [in spite of the Mist] for though at some distance before her
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1. sloping erased before [bank]
2. at (?) erased after [Paling &]
3. [Path] for track
8. that erased after [felt]
12. [her] added above line after strike