14. [must not] for ought not to
16. of it erased after [nothing]
[discerned] for seen
17. [If Charlotte had not been] over she was erased
19. or erased after [the two]
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6. [perfectly] added above line before secure
10. [by Man] perhaps inadvertently for of Man
[at their back] for behind them
12. by her erased after [ill-used]