6. [one] for that of
8. [Girls] added above line
12. [But] added above line
14. [as he (concluded erased) finished (it erased)] for having finished & refolded his Letter
[Though I dare say] over I suppose if erased
15. wd erased after [Sidney]
16. [extremely entertaining] for very amusing (to laugh at above line erased)
17. [& make us ... together] added above line
18. [by (possibly for) myself, can see nothing (either erased) in] for can see nothing in
19. [either] added above line before very