22. [in (advancing erased) promoting] for for
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5. [extra] added above line
10. quite erased before [astonished]
13. It is really erased before [frightful]
16. [more] for most
17. to one’s imagination erased after [distressing]
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7. [own] for say
13. p (i.e. poor?) erased before [Arthur]