Maki VI, Shimo

88

(Tempyô) yatose to ifu toshi hinoye ne minadzuki Yoshinu no totsumiya ni idemaseru toki Akahito ga mikotonori wo uketamaharite yomeru uta hitotsu.

Yasumishishi 1

waga ohokimi no

meshi-tamafu

Yoshinu no miya ha

yama-takami 5

kumo so tanabiku

kaha hayami

se no to so kiyoki

kamusabite

mireba tafutoku 10

yoroshi nabe

mireba sayakeshi

konoyama no

tsukiba nomi koso

kono kaha no 15

tayeba nomi koso

momoshikino

ohomiya tokoro

yamu toki mo arame!

3 meshi = mishi.

11 yoroshi nabe, and likewise excellent.

14 tsukiba and 16 tayeba have much the same value.

16 nomi koso, the koso emphasizes the two nomi.

89, 90, 91

Isonokami no Otomaro no mahetsukimi (kyô) Tosa no kuni ni hanatayeshi toki uta mitsu.

89

Isonokami 1

Furu no mikoto ha

tawayame no

sadohi ni yorite

uma-zhi mono 5

naha tori-tsuke

shishi zhi mono

yumi-ya kakumite

ohokimi no

mikoto kashikomi 10

amazakaru

hina he ni makaru

furukoromo

Matsuchi no yama yu

kaheri-konu ka mo. 15

For amazakaru, furukoromo see List m. k.

90

Ohokimi no 1

mikoto kashikomi

sashinamino

kuni ni idemasu

hashikiyashi 5

waga se no kimi wo

kakemaku mo

yuyushiki kashikoshi

Suminoye no

ara hito kami 10

funa no he ni

ushi-haki-tamahi

tsuki-tamahamu

shima no saki-zaki

yori tamahamu 15

iso no saki-zaki

araki nami

kaze ni ahasezu

tsutsumi naku

mi yamahi arazu 20

sumuyakeku

kaheshi-tamahane

moto no kuni he ni.

3-4 perhaps should run sashinamino | Tosa no kuni ni | idemasu ya.

10 ara = arahareru—but see Aston, Shintô.

12 ushi = mushi (ni shite hakasu).

13, 15 tsuki rather refers to direction, yori to approach.

19 = tsutsuga naku, untroubled.

21 = sumiyaka ni. Motowori says sumu = susumu.

For sashinamino see List m. k.

91

Chichi kimi ni 1

are ha manago so

omo tozhi ni

are ha manago so

mawi-nobori 5

yaso uji hito no

tamuke suru

Kashiko no saka ni

nusa matsuri

are ha so makaru 10

tohoki Tosa-ji wo.

5, 6, 7 introduce kashiko (Kashiko). Motowori considers the subject of 5 to be Isonokami.

92

Nara no miyako no aretaru wo kanashimi yomeru uta hitotsu.

Yasumishishi 1

waga ohokimi no

takashikasu

Yamato kuni ha

sumerogi no 5

kami no mi yo yori

shikimaseru

kuni nishi areba

aremasamu

miko no tsugi tsugi 10

amenoshita

shiroshimesamu to

ya ho yorodzu

chi-tose wo kanete

sadamekemu 15

Nara no miyako ha

kagirohino

haru nishi areba

Kasuga yama

Mikasa no nu-he ni 20

sakura hana

ko no kure-gakure

kaho-tori ha

ma naku shiba naku

tsuyushimono 25

aki sari-kureba

Hakahi yama

Tobuhi ga take ni

hagi no ye wo

shigarami chirashi 30

sawoshika ha

tsuma yobi-toyome

yama mireba

yama mo migahoshi

sato mireba 35

sato mo sumiyoshi

mononofuno

yaso tomo no wo no

uchi-hahete

sato namishikeba 40

ametsuchi no

yori-ahi no kihami

yorodzu no yo ni

sakaye yukamu to

omohi nishi 45

ohomiya sura wo

tanomerishi

Nara no miyako wo

arata yo no

koto nishi areba 50

ohokimi no

hiki no manimani

haruhanano

utsurohi kahari

muratorino 55

asa tachi yukeba

sasudakeno

ohomiya hito no

fumi narashi

kayohishi michi ha 60

uma mo yukazu

hito mo yukaneba

are ni keru ka mo!

3 takashikasu = takashirasu.

9 araharemasamu.

24 The first naku = not-be, the second, cry, sing.

39 uchi-hahete, hafu, extend.

41-42 set forth men’s hopes. Nara would long endure—a sort of common form in lays of this character. 53 to end describe the impermanence of things and the desolation of the abandoned Capital.

For yasumishishi, kagirohino, tsuyushimono, mononofuno, haruhanano, muratorino, sasudakeno see List m. k. Most of these can only be rendered indirectly.

93, 94

Kuni no nihimiyako wo tatafuru uta futatsu.

93

Akitsukami 1

waga ohokimi no

ame no shita

Yashima no uchi ni

kuni ha shi mo 5

ohoku aredomo

sato ha shi mo

saha ni aredomo

yama nami no

yoroshiki kuni to 10

kaha nami no

tachi-afu sato to

Yamashiro no

Kase-yama no ma ni

miya-hashira 15

futoshiki matsuri

takashirasu

Futagi no miya ha

kaha chikami

se no to so kiyoki 20

yama chikami

tori ga ne-doyomu

aki sareba

yama mo todoro ni

sawoshika ha 25

tsuma yobi-doyome

haru sareba

woka be no shizhi ni

ihaho ni ha

hana saki-wowori 30

ana omoshiro

Futagi no hara

ito tafuto

ohomiya tokoro

ubeshi koso 35

waga ohokimi ha

kimi no mani

kikashitamahite

sasudakeno

ohomiya koko to 40

sadamekerashi mo.

For akitsukami, sasudakeno see List m. k.

94

Waga ohokimi 1

kami no mikoto no

takashirasu

Futagi no miya ha

momo ki moru 5

yama ha ko-dakashi

ochi-tagitsu

se no ’to mo kiyoshi

uguhisu no

ki naku haru he ha 10

ihaho ni ha

yama shita-hikari

nishiki nasu

hana saki wowori

sawoshika no 15

tsuma yobu aki ha

ama-girafu

shigure wo itami

sanidzurafu

momichi chiritsutsu 20

yachi tose ni

are tsukashitsutsu

ame no shita

shiroshimesamu to

momo yo ni mo 25

kaharubekaranu

ohomiya tokoro.

Wotomera ga 1

umi wo kaku chifu

Kase no yama

toki shi yukereba

miyako to narinu. 5

5 The meaning of moru is disputed. The Kogi follows Motowori, taking moru as equivalent to shigeru.

22 = chôtei ni tsukahematsuru wo. are = arahare.

3 kase, homophon of Kase, means skein or spool.

For sanidzurafu, see List m. k.

95

Haru no koro Mika no hara no miyako no aretaru wo kanashimi yomeru uta hitotsu.

Mika no hara 1

Kuni no miyako ha

yama takami

kaha no se kiyomi

ari yoshi to 5

hito ha ihedomo

sumi yoshi to

are ha omohedo

furi nishi

sato nishi areba 10

kuni miredo

hito mo kayohazu

sato mireba

ihe no aretari

hashikeyashi 15

kaku arikeru ka

mi moro tsuku

Kase yama no ma ni

saku hana ni

iro medzurashiku 20

momotorino

kowe natsukashiki

ari-gahoshi

sumi yoki sato no

aruraku woshi mo! 25

2 Kuni, is City-Royal; in 11 kuni is ‘land’ or ‘country.’

15 must be read, though indirectly, with 18, 16 being parenthetical.

17 Motowori prefers umi wo kaku (see 94).

tsuku = tsukuru.

25 aruraku = aruru, lie desolate, waste.

For momotorino see List m. k.

96

Naniha no miya nite yomeru uta hitotsu.

Yasumishishi 1

waga ohokimi no

ari-gayofu

Naniha no miya ha

isanatori 5

umi katatsukite

tama hirifu

hama he wo chikami

asa ha furu

nami no ’to sawaki 10

yufu nagi ni

kaji no ’to kikoyu

akatoki no

ne-same ni kikeba

umi chikami 15

shihohi no muta

urasu ni ha

chidori tsuma yobi

ashi-he ni ha

tadzu ga ne-doyomu 20

miru hito no

katari ni sureba

kiku hito no

mimakuhori suru

mikemukafu 25

Ajifu no miya ha

miredo akanu ka wo.

16 muta = tomo ni.

22 ni = wo.

24 migahoshiku.

27 akanu, unwearied of.

For yasumishishi, isanatori, mikemukafu see List m. k.

97

Minume no ura wo suguru toki yomeru uta hitotsu.

Yachihokono 1

kami no mi yo yori

momofuneno

hatsuru tomari to

Yashima kuni 5

momo funa hito no

sadameteshi

Minume no ura ha

asa kaze ni

ura nami sawaki 10

yufu nami ni

tamamo ha ki-yoru

shira manago

kiyoki hama-he ha

yuki kaheri 15

miredomo akazu

ubeshi koso

miru hito goto ni

katari-tsugi

shinubikerashiki 20

momoyo hete

shinubaye yukamu

kiyoki shira hama.

1-7 introductory to 8. 9 to end descriptive and eulogistic.

13 manago = masago, sand, pebbles.

For yachihokono, momofuneno see List m. k.