“pillars formed of sprouting plaintain were fixed in the earth” to plantain.
[Chapter LIV]
“Shree Kishnù Chund, having thus inspired the brahmin” to Krishnù.
“to receive them: and having, met the bridegroom with great honour” delete the comma.
“for the reception of the bridegroon and his train, entertained” to bridegroom.
[Chapter LV]
(performing the ceremony “Arta,” showerd down flowers) to showered.
“where Rajas Oorgursen, Soorsen, Basoodeo and all the grandees” to Oogursen.
[Chapter LVII]
“conferring happiness and wealth; Worship it continually,” to worship.