“and suffering great afflction, they began to weep and lament” to affliction.
(explained all his anxieties to his wife His wife said, “O husband!) add period after the first wife.
[Chapter LVIII]
“went thence to Akroor, joining his hands bowing his head,” add comma after hands.
“and came to Shree Krishnù Chund, the extirpater of grief” to extirpator.
“and there was abundance All the distress and want that had been” add period after abundance.
[Chapter LX]
“Tell me what answer I am to take back from you to this requst” to request.
“he ate up all the sweatmeats and other confections” to sweetmeats.
[Chapter LXI]