I., 4, 84: “May you suc prosper.” “Succeed” was the original word, but cancelled for one which scans better.
I., 5, 23: “Clarindore” cancelled at end of line, “Cleremond” substituted. Clarindore is mentioned in the next line.
I., 5, 66: “Summer's sunne”: “heate” substituted for “sunne.”
II., 1. 81: “That” deleted after “assurance”; the line thereby runs more smoothly.
II., 3, 5: “Thy selfe”: “selfe” deleted before “strengthe.”
III., 2, 16: “That with incessant labour to searche out.” After “labour” “searche” is deleted. In other words, the construction is changed: the main verb being “dives” in the next line, instead of the original intention, “searches.”
III., 3, 124: “Perform'd” deleted before “expir'd.”
V., 1, 111: “In hell's most uglie cullors.” “Horrid coullors” is deleted before the last two words.
V., 1, 189: “Nor did I scorn”: “him” after “scorn” is deleted, as if the syntax had been changed.
V., 1, 206: “Acknowledged” deleted before “appointed.”