shikitaheno
makura to makite
naseru kimi kamo! 5
vv. 3, 5 kara must be so read, not gara—it is perhaps a form of nagara.
9 tari-yukamu, be perfect; read this line after next.
11 Read with Naka.
15 lit. time-wind or seasonable or fair wind, but probably also seaward and landward winds more or less accompanying morning and evening tides.
24 hiki-ori = draw-break, i.e. by moving the steering oar right or left break the straight course of the vessel.
30 ihori, iho-wori.
31 ’to for oto.