347. #al recordar mi memoria#, when memory would bring to mind.
371 et seq. Note that vos, piedra, bóveda, suelo are all direct objects of invoco, line 379. Not you, but rather the inanimate stone … that vaulted ceiling … that pavement … do I call upon as witnesses….
377. #a no ser … huella#, if it were not as hard and cold as the one that walks upon it.
381. #que# = for; #le = al afán.#
384. #oyera = pudiera, podría, oírla.#
413. #ofrecí dar#, I would gladly have given.
423-426. Compare corresponding lines in first edition:
Cuanto padezco mirad pues ya como dicha cuento que mis penas un momento suspendan su intensidad.
447-450. #Vuestras razones … crimen#, your words of intercession carry conviction to his heart; any hesitation or reluctance on my part would be (considered) disrespect, sinful.
455. #que … mortaja = que él se limite a tenerme una cruz y una mortaja#, he need do no more than provide me a cross and a shroud.