Maki XVI, Shimo

205

Se no kimi wo kofuru uta.

Ihi-hamedo 1

umaku mo arazu

arukedomo

yasuku mo arazu

akanesasu 5

kimi ga kokoro shi

wasure kanetsu mo.

For akanesasu see List m. k.

206

Umasakewo 1

Oshitaru wo-nu yu

idzuru midzu

nuruku ha idezu

mashimidzuno 5

kokoro mo keya ni

omohoyuru

oto no sukunaki

michi ni ahanu ka mo

sukunaki yo 10

michi ni ahasaba

iro keseru

suga kasa wo-kasa

waga unageru

tama no nanatsu wo 15

tori-kahe mo

mawosamu mono wo

sukunaki [yo]

michi ni ahanu ka mo.

1 umasake, sweet, pure (sweet or delicious sake).

2 Oshitaru, oshi-shitaru, written as fall or flow down, but here a place-name.

4 nuruku here = gentle.

6 kokoro mo keya ni = kokoro mo isagiyoku oboyuru kiyoki midzu.

10 sukunaki, oto no sukunaki yoshi.

12 iro is the iro of irose, irodo—also ira, iri, a word of endearment and respect.

15 nanatsu wo, seven, i.e. many beads.

17 mawosamu = mairasemu, a woman’s word.

1-7 are an introduction to oto.

For umasakewo, mashimidzuno see List m. k.

207

Noto no kuni no uta.

Hashitate no 1

Kumaki no yara ni

Shiraki wono

otoshi-ire wa shi

kakete kakete 5

na nakashi so ne

uki-idzuru ya to

mimu wa shi.

4 wa shi, an exclamation common in saibara plays. According to Keichiu it means here nanji, thou. The Kogi takes it as yo shi.

208

Noto no kuni no uta.

Hashitate no 1

Kumaki saka-ya ni

ma-nuraru

yatsuko wa shi

sasuhi tate 5

wite ki-namashi wo

ma-nuraru

yatsuko wa shi.

3 ma-nuraru = ma noraru; noru means revile, abuse (nonoshiru).

5 sasuhi tate = sasohi (sasofu), invite—tate has the usual force.

6 ki-namashi, namashi has an optative meaning.

209

Kashima ne no 1

Tsukuwe no shima no

shitatami wo

i-hirihi mote-kite

ishi mochi 5

tsutsuki hafuri

haya kaha ni

arahi susuki

kara shiho ni

koko to momi 10

takatsuki ni mori

tsukuwe ni tatete

haha ni matsuritsu ya

metsuko no tozhi

chichi ni matsuritsu ya 15

mi metsuko no tozhi.

2 Tsukuwe, word-play with tsukuwe (12)?.

6 scoop out (the flesh).

10 koko, the noise of pounding.

11 mori must here mean pile up, heap up.

13 tatematsuri, offer, present.

14 metsuko. How to render this word is not clear. It may be a title only, [女津子]. But (I.) gives it as = utsukushimu ko.

210

Shika no tame ni omohi wo nobete yomeru uta.

Itoko 1

nase no kimi

wori wori te

mono ni i-yuku to

Kara kuni no 5

tora tofu kami wo

ike-tori ni

ya tsu tori mochi-ki

sono kaha wo

tatami ni sashi 10

yahe tatami

Heguri no yama ni

u-tsuki to

sa-tsuki no hodo ni

kusuri-gari 15

tsukafuru toki ni

ashihikino

kono kata-yama ni

futatsu tatsu

ichihi ga moto ni 20

adzusayumi

yatsu tabasami

hime kabura

yatsu tabasami

shishi matsu to 25

aga woru toki ni

sawo-shika no

ki-tachi nagekaku

tachimachi ni

are ha shinubeshi 30

ohokimi ni

are ha tsukahemu

aga tsunu ha

mi kasa no hayashi

aga mimi ha 35

mi sumi no tsubo

aga mera ha

ma sumi no kagami

aga tsume ha

mi yumi no yubazu 40

aga kera ha

mi fude no hayashi

aga kaha ha

mi hako no kaha ni

aga shishi ha 45

mi namasu hayashi

aga kimo mo

mi namasu hayashi

aga migi ha

mi shiho no hayashi 50

oi-hatenu

waga mi hitotsu ni

nana-he hana saku

ya-he hana saku to

mawoshi-hayasane 55

mawoshi-hayasane.

1-10 make a phrasal m. k. to 11, 12.

1, 2 itoko nase, terms of endearment (itohoshi ko nanji no se?).

3 wori-worite implies long union of husband and wife.

4 mono ni i-yuku; an exclamatory phrase denoting an intention or wish to go somewhere or do something.

8 ya tsu, eight head of, i.e. many-head of.

17 ashihiki = m. k.

18 kata-yama, out of the way, remote mountain, i.e. from City-Royal. But Heguri is in Yamato.

34 hayashi, to complete, adorn, make flourish, finish off.

38 ma sumi, right clear, the script is kariji.

41 kera, ‘hairs’, like mera above, ‘eyes’.

46, 48, 50 hayashi, chop, mince.

55 hayasane or hayazane, precative imperative; hayasu, to praise.

For ashihikino, adzusayumi, see List m. k.

211

Kani no tane ni omohi wo nobete yomeru uta.

Oshiteruya 1

Naniha no Woye ni

iho tsukuri

namarite woru

ashi kani wo 5

ohokimi mesu to

nani semu ni

a wo mesurame ya

akirakeku

a ha shiru koto wo 10

utahito to

wa wo mesurame ya

fuye-fuki to

wa wo mesurame ya

koto-hiki to 15

wa wo mesurame ya

ka mo kaku mo

mi koto ukemu to

kefu kefu to

Asuka ni itari 20

okanedomo

Okina ni itari

tsukanedomo

Tsukunu ni itari

himukashi no 25

naka no mikado yu

mawiri-kite

mi koto ukureba

uma ni koso

fumodashi kaku mono 30

ushi ni koso

hana naha hakure

ashihikino

kono kata yama no

momu nire wo 35

iho ye hagitari

ama-teru ya

hi no ke ni hoshi

sahidzuru ya

Kara usu ni tsuki 40

niha ni tatsu

suri usu ni tsuki

oshiteruya

Naniha no Woye no

hatsu-tare wo 45

karaku-tari kite

suwe hito no

tsukureru kame wo

kefu yukite

asu tori-mochi-ki 50

waga mera ni

shiho nuritamahi

mochi-hayasu mo

mochi-hayasu mo.

Hito-tama no 1

sawo naru kimi ga

tada hitori

aherishi ama yo [ha

hisashiku omohoyu]. 5

4 namarite, an old word, obscure, retired, remote (namari, dialect, and namari, lead (the metal) are probably the same word—something far away [from City-Royal]).

22 oki, rise, stand up.

30 fumodashi (fumi wo hodashi).

32 hakure, haku, string a bow.

34 kata yama, see 210.

35 momu = momo.

39 sahidzuru = koto sahegu.

45 hatsu-tare = hazhime-taretaru.

5 The part in [] is probably corrupt.

For oshiteruya, ashihikino see List m. k.

212

[Tempyô] 13 nen 2 gwatsu Mika no hara no nihi miyako wo homuru uta.

Yamashiro no 1

Kuni no miyako ha

haru sareba

hana saki wowori

aki sareba 5

momichi-ba nihohi

obaseru

Idzumi no kaha no

kami tsu se ni

uchi hashi watashi 10

yodo se ni ha

uki-hashi watashi

ari-gayohi

tsukahematsuramu

yorodzu yo made ni. 15

10 uchi-hashi (I), rough or temporary bridge; so too Motowori.

12 uki-hashi, floating bridge, hanging bridge, boat-bridge.

213

Mimakareru oto wo kanashimu uta.

Amazakaru 1

hina wosame ni

ohokimi no

make no manimani

idete koshi 5

ware wo okuru to

awoniyoshi

Nara yama sugite

Idzumi kaha

kiyoki kahara ni 10

uma todome

wakareshi toki ni

ma-sakikute

are kaheri komu

tahirakeku 15

ihahite mate to

katarahite

koshi hi no kihami

tamahokono

michi wo ta-tohomi 20

yama kaha no

he narite areba

kohishikeku

ke nagaki mono wo

mimakuhori 25

omofu ahida ni

tamadzusano

tsukahi no kereba

ureshimi to

aga machi tofu ni 30

oyodzure no

tahagoto to ka mo

hashikiyashi

na oto no mikoto

nani shika mo 35

toki shi ha aramu

hata-susuki

ho ni ’dzuru aki no

hagi no hana

nihoheru yado wo 40

asa niha ni

idetachi narashi

yufu niha ni

fumi-tahiragezu

Saho no uchi no 45

sato wo yuki-sugi

ashihikino

yama no konure ni

shirakumo ni

tachi-tanabiku to 50

are ni tsugetsuru!

18 koshi hi = wakareshi hi yore.

20 ta-tohomi, ta is an intensitive prefix.

22 he, short for hedate.

24 ke nagaki = ki-he nagaki.

33 hashikiyashi (hashi-ke ya-shiya = yo).

34 na is the na (nanji?) of na se, na imo, &c.

42-4 The negative of tahiragezu is implied also in narashi.

For amazakaru, awoniyoshi, tamahokono, tamadzusano, ashihikino see List m. k.

214

[Tempyô] 19 nen Kisaragi no tsuki hatsuka no hi tachimachi yamahi ni shidzumi hotohoto mi-usenamu to su kare uta wo yomite kanashimi wo noburu hito uta.

Ohokimi no 1

make no manimani

masurawono

kokoro furi-okoshi

ashihikino 5

yama saka koyete

amazakaru

hina ni kudariki

iki dani mo

imada yasumezu 10

toshi tsuki mo

ikura mo aranu ni

utsusemino

yo no hito nareba

uchi-nabiki 15

toko ni koi-fushi

itakeku shi

hi ni ke ni masaru

tarachineno

haha no mikoto no 20

ohobuneno

yukura yukura ni

shita-gohi ni

itsu ka mo komu to

matasuramu 25

kokoro sabushiku

hashikiyoshi

tsuma no mikoto mo

akekureba

kado ni yori-tachi 30

koromodewo

wori-kaheshitsutsu

yufu sareba

toko uchi-harahi

nubatamano 35

kurokami shikite

itsushika to

nagekasuramu so

imo mo se mo

wakaki kodomo ha 40

wochi-kochi ni

sawaki nakuramu

tamahokono

michi wo ta-dohomi

ma-tsukahi mo 45

yaru yoshi mo nashi

omohoshiki

koto tsute yarazu

kofuru nishi

kokoro ha moyenu 50

tamakiharu

inochi woshikedo

semu sube no

tadoki wo shirani

kaku shite ya 55

arashi-wo sura ni

nageki fuseramu.

15 That is, yamahi ni.

18 = ki-he ni-masaru = pass on—increase.

23 shita-gohi = inner or deep, desire, love or yearning.

28 mikoto = here a title of respect applied to the wife.

38 nagekasuramu, honour-causative. Compare with the ordinary form below, nakuramu.

45 ma-tsukahi mo nashi, no messenger one way or the other.

56 = masurawo.

57 ya being removed to a position after fuseramu, makes the sense clearer.

vv. 6-20 relate to the poet’s illness.

For masurawono, ashihikino, amazakaru, utsusemino, tarachineno, ohobuneno, koromodewo, nubatamano, tamahokono, tamakiharu see List m. k.

215

Yakamochi (mizhika uta).

Haru no hana 1

ima ha sakari ni

nihofuramu

worite kazasamu

ta-jikara mo ga mo! 5

Uguhisu no 1

naki chirasamu

haru no hana

itsushika kimi to

wori kazasamu! 5

Ikenushi (mizhika uta).

Yama-gahi ni 1

sakeru sakura wo

tada hito me

kimi ni miseteba

nani wo ka omohamu! 5

Uguhisu no 1

ki naku yamabuki

utakata mo

kimi ga te furezu

hana chirame ya mo! 5

Yakamochi’s mizhika, 4, 5 wori, break.

Ikenushi’s mizhika, 3 utakata = shibarakuutakata is foam; the expression is probably a metaphor.

215 (naga-uta)

20 Tempyô 3 guwatsu mi ka no hi Yakamochi ga uta.

Ohokimi no 1

make no manimani

shinazakaru

Koshi wo wosame ni

idetekoshi 5

masurahare sura

yo no naka no

tsune shinakereba

uchi nabiki

toko ni koi-fushi 10

itakeku no

hi no ke ni maseba

kanashikeku

koko ni omohi-de

iranakeku 15

soko ni omohi-de

nageku sora

yasukeku naku ni

omofu sora

kurushiki monowo 20

ashihikino

yama kihe narite

tamahokono

michi ni tohokeba

ma-tsukahi mo 25

yaru yoshi mo nami

omohoshiki

koto mo kayohazu

tamakiharu

inochi woshikedo 30

semu sube no

tadoki mo shirani

komori-wite

omohi nagekahi

nagusamuru 35

kokoro ha nashi ni

haru hana no

sakeru sakaru ni

omofu dochi

tawori kazasazu 40

haru no nu no

shigemi tobikuku

uguhisu no

kowe dani kikazu

wotomera ga 45

haru na tsumasu to

kurenawino

akamo no suso no

harusame ni

nihohi hidzuchite 50

kayofuramu

toki no sakari wo

itadzura ni

sugushi yaritsure

shinubaseru 55

kimi ga kokoro wo

uruhashimi

kono yo sugara ni

i mo nezu ni

kefu mo shimirani 60

kohitsutsu so woru.

6 masurawo ware.

14, 16 koko, soko, here and there, variously.

15 iranakeku = irairashi, vexed, sad.

16 omohi-de, thought-go-forth, think of, dwell upon.

22 Read as if yama mawiri hedatari.

42 fly in and out in crowds.

55 Hon. caus.

56 kimi is Ikenushi; kokoro, that is, of his letter, &c.

60 = owarazu.

1-6 Exordium.

9-12 are copied from 214.

9-20 Yakamochi’s illness.

21-36 His regrets.

37-54 Regrets he cannot enjoy the spring.

55 to end, addressed to Ikenushi.

13, 14, 15, 16 are found thus arranged (15, 16, 13, 14) in K. App. LI.

56 kimi is Ikenushi.

For shinazakaru, ashihikino, tamahokono, tamakiharu see List m. k.