[Chapter I]
“4. Whilst the Raja Pureechit was drowned in this sea of” delete 4..
(“O son! what is this thou hast done why have you pronounced a curse on the Raja, under whose government we lived at ease; not a bird, nor a beast even was afflicted.) Add question mark after done and change the semicolon to a question mark.
(to say, “O abode of compassion you have shown great mercy in) add exclamation mark after compassion.
Change “how their pride brought Kawun and Koonbhkurun to such destruction” to Rawun and Koombhkurun.
“you destroyed the great demon, Kawun: and whenever devils” to Rawun.
[Chapter II]
“On the hearing this, the Raja Pureechit said to Shookdeo” delete the first the.
[Chapter III]
“joining its hands, came before him Vishnù said to it” add period after him.